Review of chapter "Sweet Sixteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
In case I neglected to mention it earlier,I sort of loved this little series. So nice to think of Dawn and Connor AND the Leverage folks ending up in such a uniquely functional family unit.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
You know... I've NEVER thought about an EliotxParkerxHardison threesome before.
Now I really really really want to go see if I can find some more stories where that is featured. Jesus. Surprise pairings that are actually well written? Amazing! Parker's whole stealing them thing was so Parker. It just... Works. Major props to you. Love this series a lot.
Dawn and Connor are so adorable here and all of their hangups like the 'om nom' game are completely justified with the life they lived previous. I even liked the fact that you added in their abilities. Poor kids. The Leverage Inc handled it well, though.
Good job on this.
One suggestion, though. More EliotxParkerxHardison? =D
Comments from author:
THEY ARE MY OT3 OF AWESOME, OKAY?! *ahem* I love them a lot.
I WILL REC YOU SOME!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if there wasn't a whole lot of OT3ness. :)
And finally, my favoritest Parker/Hardison/Eliot fic EVAR!: is actually a series. Start at the bottom and make your way up. Trust me, it's awesome. The Odd Jobs series: http://emeraldwoman.livejournal.com/tag/odd%20jobs
Wednesday Addams! So awesome. She is bloodthirsty and violent with no real social skills and so is he. They are a match made in awkward. And which Jared is Dawn's Jared. Because it would be killer if it was Labrynth Jared. I am so glad you're back. I've missed your writing. I hope your break was everything you wanted it to be.
Comments from author:
Yes! They are! And Jared as in The Pretender's Jared. My break was...largely unfruitful and uneventful. Yeah.
Glad your back! I enjoyed reading these again- poor Connor having to ask her out- Lol. And in my mind at prom he'll meet a hunky man and end up at a hotel/the man's place and have hot man sex...lol.
Comments from author:
Only sort of back, alas. My flash drive got broken and I've had to send it off to see if they could save the data. Glad you liked them, even if you rewrote the ending. ;)~
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Woooo hoooo! I was so excited to see you post tonight. . . and even better, it was a follow up to the Lullaby Job, one of my all time favorites of yours! Well done and welcome back! I liked the section with Parker informing the boys that she'd stolen them, and that it took that long for them to realize. Nicely handled. All of the sections were great.
Thanks!
Comments from author:
Hello, hello, hello!! I'm glad you enjoyed them. I've known since I finished it that I was going to have to do something with the little snippets of ideas that I'd come up with while working on the story but could never fit in and I'm glad that everyone seems to enjoy them for what they are. And I like Parker's idea of reality. I want to go live there.
Review By [jakreide] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Brilliant! Utterly delightful to see more in the Lullaby series, and it's wonderful that Elliot, Parker & Hardison actually finally figured out that they were in a relationship!
Of course, you realise that now you've tempted us and confirmed that you actually can write more in the same universe, we're going to be demanding more... :)
Comments from author:
Oh, I've never been unable to right in the same universe (check ever-growing series list), I just need the appropriate...prompting. I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [ianquest] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]