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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Aryll...this was REALLY good. No doubt about it, my favorite thing that you have ever wrote. I think you captured the characterization of *everyone* perfectly. The descent into Dawn's crush was gradual and written believably. The make-out moment was hot. I liked your style - the italicized verbals and the way you set up scenes. AND the way you wrote out Dawn's passion for dance - I can so see it (esp after the musical ep)

This was very, VERY good.

And I'm not even a Glee fan (not much, anyways) :)
Comments from author:
Wow, thank you Luna! I'm so glad you like! And that's high praise coming from one of my favourite authors :)

This was my first straight up romance; I'm happy everyone stayed in character.

Thanks so much for the rec!!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [4 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RomanaOne
Review:
I think I just died. *favourites*
Comments from author:
:D Thanks for the rec!
Review By [RomanaOne] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chickalupe
Review:
D'awww... so cute! I too have a bit of a crush on Brittany; which is unusual because I am normally only attracted to really intelligent characters, but there's just something about her, y'know? I liked Dawn's POV in this, and I can really picture her mannerisms and her having a secret love for dance... and Brittany, teehee! Liked the story a lot, keep up the great work! Good contribution to Fem-Slash day. :D
Comments from author:
I know! Brittany is so cute even though she might be the dumbest character on TV, it doesn't really seem to matter. I had a lot of fun writing this and looking up the different dance styles, so I'm glad you liked it too! Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Chickalupe] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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