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Review of chapter "Epilogue : You can't make me" from deathgeonous
Review:
Rule 0, don't anger the wife. Hehe. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [5 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past lives can and will bite you on the ass" from DieselDriver
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This is wonderful. I've read it before and from your A/N I tried to get to FF.net. I get some screwy girl dragon anime site instead.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bring me the head of Anubis" from DieselDriver
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Per the note at the end of chapter 3, I like this story. Needs a little editing and fixing of minor things like "you're" instead of "your" and a few extra words but all in all, good start.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [26 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue : You can't make me" from bradsan
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Love the story. Only one thing. the name Seniya, you wrote the name wrong. The name is Sineya instead of Seniya. I looked it up on the internet at the site Buffyworld. It's a little thing but every time a read the name Seniya I couldn't shake the feeling that it doesn't fit.
It's something small.

Like I said before loved it. Hoping on a sequel.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue : You can't make me" from Genuka
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evil evil evil author.... *evil smirk*

That was a ^wonderful^ tale! I'd love to read more.
Comments from author:
I always felt there was more to write in this verse. Once I've finished tackling some of current WIP's then you'll probably that I'll write some more in this verse.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue : You can't make me" from immortalbliss
Review:
This was a nice read. I read it all at one time. Thanks for posting!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm pleased that you enjoyed reading it.
:-)
Review By [immortalbliss] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue : You can't make me" from Blackett
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I enjoyed this story so much. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue : You can't make me" from Jerri
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I've really enjoyed reading this and would like to see a sequel or further adventures of Bella and Jack. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I've enjoyed writing this and feel there could still be more to write.
Review By [Jerri] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue : You can't make me" from VillageOrchid
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This is amusing overall. I think your story theme might be a bit better suited to some steamy original fic with adventure and romance, but you have enough bits of the series characters that I was able to follow along.
Was there a paragraph or something about the quickening that I missed? Was the chanting enough to keep it from being visible?
Comments from author:
I've started to write some original fiction. Honestly I could kick myself for missing the quickening. I like your thought that it was the chanting that stopped it becoming visible.

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate feedback!
k
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explanations and Spars" from VillageOrchid
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I guess "Bella" has had enough of being "just Buffy."
Comments from author:
True but she was Bella long before she was Buffy.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Has Jack O'Neill met his match?" from VillageOrchid
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Very cute follow up. Nice characterization.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue : You can't make me" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Yup, never mess with a loved one! Isn't that somewhere on the Evil Overlord's list?
Comments from author:
Yep. It's rule two right under - Don't die!
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How the arrogant fall" from grd
Review:
No light show after the beheading?
Comments from author:
I'm gonna hold my hands up and say whoops.
Review By [grd] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bring me the head of Anubis" from mithrilandtj
Review:
LOL!
More please!
Comments from author:
Thank you! The new chapters will be up shortly.
:-)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Has Jack O'Neill met his match?" from Thedruid
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This, is bad. Amatuar writeing is one thing, even uncreative writeing. But what you did was take another's story, removed all the drama and chacter building that it had and called it your own story. If it was possible to give negative rateings, this would be a -3.

Reply - It isn't just that your copying from anothers work, it's that your making it worse. What you have here is like a 5 page re-write of a full Shakesphere play, with bad actors. You've removed the stuff that made the other story good, even if it was unfinished. Your only keeping a short description of the events, and moving on before any actual story happens. Not to metion that it's nearly a Mary Sue with everyone from the SGC side just standing around in awe and even fainting around her.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry you feel that way as most people have enjoyed the story. The reason I wrote my own story is because they were several unfinished stories floating around. However, I'd like to say this, This is MY story. I have acknowledged where the idea came from and I have not tried to claim anyone else's work. Even making such a suggestion is unfair.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [1 out of 10]
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