Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
BrownFinderthReview:
Most delightful and heartwarming story!!!
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BrownFinderth] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
zamiaReview:
Very enjoyable and entertaining story. Your good grammar also made it a joy to read. All the best for the future. Cheers.
Z
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zamia] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
RaiderReview:
outstanding!
Review By [
Raider] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
MaltorReview:
Poor Fleur... Her wedding is turning into an episode of The Jerry Springer Show where they bring out the mothers with their kids while Jerry reads the results of the paternity tests. Bonus points if someone starts chanting "Jerry! Jerry!" in the next chapter before throwing a chair at someone.
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Maltor] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
EurekaReview:
So whom does he have there? One of the mothers or all of them????
Review By [
Eureka] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
darkcarnageReview:
Interesting start so far. I hope there is a follow up chapter.
Review By [
darkcarnage] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
