Another wonderful installment of MO! Keep 'em coming.
I really hope to seen more of Hanna in future stories, Webb as well. I can see them both being a good fit for a Buffy-run-counsel. Hanna is one of my favorite characters and there's not much fan fic for her.
Now going to go eagerly read the next part!
Review By [Jackaniny] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
"The only upside of losing my shoes was that I lost them in Paris." Hah. Amusing series, even if I forget what half the acronyms mean by the end of a chapter. :)
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from DaveTurner
Review:
Wonderful!
D.
Review By [DaveTurner] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from texaswookie
Review:
Didn't even realize this was finished. Don't you hate it when you miss an update? Great story all in all (still need to watch Hanna though) can hardly wait to see what comes out of your brain next. Her unit reasigned to Transformer duty, introduced to lady croft and pulled into a treasure hunt, maybe Buffy will be meeting the Aliens next? Can hardly wait to see where the wind blows your imagination next.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it!
I just finished up 'Second String' and now I'm working on a Challenge Response x-over with John Carter of Mars.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from WildMartin
Review:
Watched Hanna yesterday so that I would avoid spoilers then picked back up at chapter 13. Awesome finish, but I'd really like to know what happens during the clean-up to those involved. I really, really like this series of yours.
Review By [WildMartin] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from Hecatonchires
Review:
Gah! What happened to the others?
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [3 Nov 11] • Not Rated
You know, the Watcher's Journals on Buffy will make for some terrifying reading >:). SOMEONE is recording this for Slayers everywhere, or there's no justice at ALL *Very Evil Grin*
If THEY aren't you can bet the Demons are!
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Awesome! Someone else gets to clean up the mess :) Seems like there is some mess that got mised though, as you said Walsh is still missing... Hopefully David has her and she didn't just escape. Well done on another great story.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
A great story in your excellent series. I look forward to reading the next one.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from evilredknight
Review:
What's in the package? Why, everyone reading knows it's the most evil creation ever created. Scientists working for an evil cabal(Wolf, Ram, and Hart) are re-developed it.
It's THE FORMULA FOR NEW COKE!!!
Yes! Yes! We only thought it was destroyed. They used the cover of a megaton nuclear bomb test to get rid of it the first time. They thought it was gone forever! But it`s BAAAACCK!
...the HORROR... ...the HORROR...
Ohh...other then that, good story.
Comments from author:
Crystal Pepsi was worse...
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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