That was pretty cute. If you continue this, will you comment more on what Buffy thinks of the Doctor and Martha and how she relates to them or will you leave that for Not Quite Paradise (for the Doctor atleast)?
I really enjoyed the chapter, and I love the idea of Buffy keeping a journal, particularly because the short entries, snark, and commentary are spot on with her character. I'm really glad you are writing for this series again!
Review By [Sinangeled] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Loved it. Nice look at buffy's first trip with the doctor and Martha that was only briefly seen in the first story. Though not usually a fan of a journal type story this was done very well and if any other story in this format is done half as well you've made me a fan of them
Review By [greenfalcon] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]