This could be interesting. Just please, I'm begging here, NO Ron/Hermione matchup. Preferably no more Ron (alternate universe after all). The pairing always makes me sick to my stomach and angry at the same time. The series genius with the poster child for the Future Wife Beaters Association. Ugh.
I could very easily see Harry and company joining up to leave the Potterverse behind. There's nothing but some of his friends left for him (not many of those, either) and the Asguard scanners that come with the transporter (the two are NOT able to be separated, just for the transporter to WORK requires them (Let me know if you want/need a longer explanation of this.)) could easily pick out Hermione's parents and retrieve them for memory restoration. I know there's only a limited space on board the ship, but isn't space expansion a specialty of this universe....? Then there's also Hermione the knowledge sponge meeting a starship. Crowbars may be required to separate the two. Then there's Harry and Co.'s vaults to consider. Can you say Funding Boost? Harry meeting an A-Wing or especially a swoop bike would be fun too. Broom? What's a broom?
You could also take a shot at the old Harry vs. Luke sparring match.
I keep getting this idea in my head of them stopping for a visit in yet another H.P. verse just a little earlier in the timeline and having Harry in the quad cannon turret laying waste to the D.E. minions as they fly overhead while having a HUGE feral grin on his face. Sure would give a bit of closure and resolution for him, ya know?
Since you're coming in so late in the timeline, you could easily enough slip all of this into the main story without it being too large of a sidetrack. I hope this gives you some ideas, and thanks for the great job so far.
Comments from author:
tx for this nice and long Review. First of...you will never see that I write Ron/Hermy...*shudders at the thought* and as written in my notes before the story for this fic :) Ron died in the attack on the Ministry, so he isn't an option here.
Some of your Ideas you will see in the next chapter because they are quite similar to mine, but not all :) Harry and and A-Wing and or swoop......that I hadn't thought about, but should be fun :)
Review By [proofreader] • Date [21 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Good, good. The force makes the ultimate deus ex machnia and convenient excuse doesn't it? I'm sorry I ate your chocolate, the force made me do it :). I honestly can't see Wizards looking like anything like a challenge to a Jedi, I mean if dozens of droids with automatic blasters couldn't hit one, I doubt very much that a Wizard would have a chocolate teapots chance in hell.
Comments from author:
rofl...maybe Jana should use the excuse the next time in regards of X's hot chocolate :) And in regards of Jedi vs. Wizards... I wouldn't bet to high on the W's myself.
The force made me do it. (Bank robbing jedi) The force said it was the only way. (Mass Murdering Jedi) Its the will of the Force. (gamler jedi that cheats in card) By the Force. (Conaon the Barbarian Jedi.)
Jepp its works.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Great start to a new spin off for the knight verse crew, makes me wonder what you have planned upahead for them all. It also reminds me I should really get started on the new chap for darkness falls. Keep it up(razial
Comments from author:
Yea i am burning of curiosity
Review By [Razial] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Guessing Buffy is sick because she is pregnant, wonder if Riley's abilities will pass to the child. Might be interesting to see what abilities the child gets from its parents.
Hogwarts would provide some interesting characters to play with. It sounds from the description that this is not canon, maybe Voldemort is winning and after defeating him they have nothing to stay for and the Hogwarts crew decide to come along to SW verse.
Not sad that the Weasley's aren't there, while I read stories with them they are not my favorite characters.
Glad that Tonks is alive as she is one of the my favs.
More soon please.
Comments from author:
ahh canon went right out of the door with my comment Ron died in the MOM fight..didn't it? :) (Hawklan) Not a big fan of th W Clan myself so I ignore them when I can and yes I like Tonks as well.
(Hatten)
If she pregnant or not i do not now yet. :D i have to talk things true with the others before i comit myself to that. But IF Riley get Buffy with children Riley ability will not be inherent by any child of his.
Riley abilty are based on a spice, Black spice that merged with the cell of his body. So its not something that a child can inherent. Unless Riley put the child on a black spice diet. :D
Review By [cjcold] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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