You're first Buffy story huh. Consider me impressed. You are a good writer never doubt that. I really hope you consider to update and finish this story because it's a very good start.

The wolfs don't realize that Buffy stands above the food chain and she will never be dominated. She can't be dominated it will stand in the way when she wants has to protect or guard somebody or something. If the Alfa or all males above her gives the command don't attack of forbid something she has to obey. Somebody could die because of that. So she never can be dominated. I'm curious how you gone solve that when she paires with Oz. They probably start their own pack and leave.

I'm curious how they gone react to her story and how mad will Oz be when he hears everything. including the Scoobies pulling her from heaven and them throwing her out of her own home.

They have the Queen/Alpha Slayer in their home. Hope you will update soon because it's been a year.

Oz has always been my fav
Today he definitely made a save
Good thing for B he was there
Cuz a wolf fight would def mess up her hair
Can't wait to see more, maybe a kiss?
The next chappie I def won't miss :)

Okay, I just love this story. & yay! Oz appears! Soaking wet, but he appears. :D I really like him walking Buffy through werewolf etiquette, and loved Buffy back-handing Paul even more! LOL Oh these wolves may not like Buffy's dominant nature, but that's just the way she is! Oh & I adored the "do you think they bought it?" after Oz gave the Slayer spiel. I can't wait to see what happens as Buffy moves more in this world, especially with Oz.

Not specifically Buffy, but about the Slayer. Since the Slayer has been around probably longer then any non demon, I find it hard to believe that only a very young few have not heard about The Slayer. As probably the oldest non demon supernatural creature, it would be hard for any supernatural community to NOT have heard about the creature known as the Slayer.

I'm really enjoying this so far. I like that Buffy wouldn't submit to werewolves, I would think the Slayer is dominate to everything. I hope you update again soon!

my only quibble is the BS about none of them knowing about the Slayer. Unless you are in different dimensions, every supernatural being is going to know about the Slayer, even if it is by legend.

I think it's within the realm of possibility that they know nothing about the Slayer. If you've read the books, not a whole lot of them know about Vampires, or how to kill them. They all know of the Fae, but that's because they are out to the public, just like werewolves. The wolves are known now, but Bran keeps a lot of their behaviors hidden, just like the Fae and the Vamps do. None of them knew how to battle the demon directly in "Blood Bound."

Since none of these factions are about to tell anyone how to kill them or what they are scared of, I doubt the Slayer is well known.

Also, I'm going on the premise that this is the same dimension. Buffy's been on the Hellmouth for seven years, and in L.A. for a year before that. She's not exactly traveled the world and made a name for herself among small packs of non-evil werewolves. when it comes to the Vamps in the Tri-cities, they seem to me to be a lot smarter than the Sunnydale vamps (ex. hunting way outside their territory for food, and never taking someone that will be missed.) The wolves don't need a Slayer anyway, they police their own so there would be no reason for Buffy to have ever came around them before.

Besides, it is my opinion that with "One Girl In All the World", who could be Any girl from Any where in the world, I doubt that someone from every pack, city, state has knowledge about the Slayer. She (The Slayer) is not exactly known for letting the baddies that see her live to tell the tale. The only reason Spike and Angel knew is because they ran into one (killed by Spike), and he liked the thought of the hunted becoming the hunter and sought out others to kill.

Of course, you are entitled to your opinion as well, but I think that it is really plausible that not a lot of people (especially non-evil beings) know about her.

Definitely intrigued. Love the pairing. Know nothing about the crossover so this should definitely be enlightening. :)

I am definitely interested in this story. I love Buffy/Oz and love the MT series.

Hope you get a chance to update soon :)

great update. sorry I missed it when it first came out.

Sounds interesting! I'd like to read more!

A very entertaining story!! And as for that wolf who said her name, might it be Oz? I do hope the author is able to continue this intriguing tale!!!

Wondering who the girl is. And I think that that was Oz behind her. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ooh! I liked this chapter! Can I hope that the hand on her shoulder & the voice belonged to Oz? Loved Buffy saving the girl from the vamps, and I especially loved her stepping back so the wolves could dispose of the last vamp themselves. Hope to see more soon! )

this is a great start! I love buffy/oz pairings and this is a nice unique idea. Does peace in pack mean buffy will be in a were pack, or she is back packing?

hey, i think this fic has great potential. i dont know the genre you're crossing buffy over with but i love the buffy/oz pairing, there are soooo not enough of them lol. there were a couple of spelling mistakes tho, like when you spelt quiet as quite, but thats minor and i still think this will be a good fic. im even going to track it and everything :D lol. anyway am looking forward to your next update,

toniboo
xox

Thank you so for the review. I went back and changed the spelling mistakes. LOL I use Microsoft word when I write and I think that the spell check glosses over a lot of my mistakes if they are spelled like other words. Thanks for the save.

I agree with you on the Buffy/Oz pairing. I believe they are great together. I just hope I can get them there in a way that makes me proud and everyone else happy with it.

Again, thanks for the review. It means a lot to know that people think enough at my attempt to write that they will help me out.