Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Joseph
Review By [Joseph
] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fayari
Wait, Jean was cloned, so that makes Madelyne her sister, sort of.
Madelyne is the mother of Cable, who is then Xander's father. Cable is not his uncle in any way. Xander's grandma is Madelyne, so Jean Grey is his great aunt. And is also his mother.
Review By [Fayari
] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Dardrian
I really like this, I hope you write more!
Review By [Dardrian
] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from jaycatt
Ooh, a mutant strip club? Your mind is a very yummy place. Thanks for putting this out there!
Review By [jaycatt
] • Date [16 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from msdarque
Intriguing and fun! I'd definitely would like to read more. :D
Review By [msdarque
] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mayoi
I'm totaly in love with this story!
Please tell me there will be more.
Review By [mayoi
] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from noirekitsune
i wasnt sure about this in the beginning with how fast the back story went and all but once it got going i REALLY liked it!
and i love your flirty!Xander
i hope to see more of this soon
i'll really be looking forward to it!^^
Review By [noirekitsune
] • Date [21 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SirenFire
i really like this fic. very different take on the xmen crossover cant wait for an update
Review By [SirenFire
] • Date [1 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from jgoodman
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman
] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Faeri
Awesome stuff so far, I cant wait for the next parts to come out! I hope you're able to update soon! ^_^
Review By [Faeri
] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Saharra
Ooooo This is a lovely story! Is there the possibility of Peter/Xander if MJ divorces him? Or Remy/Xander? Or a trio? That would be good too. I bet Logan smelled Peter or Auntie May...
Review By [Saharra
] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from superfan
Just so you know, in canon the name of the thing is cerebro. just say'n.
Also, don't have a problem with the slash. I can read anything as long as it's good.
Review By [superfan
] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from silvergaurd
hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd
] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kaosreign
Okay i hate to do this but i was okay when you decided to make him a test tube baby, i was iffy when you made him the product of Incest without the actual sexual intercourse but now you´ve turned two of my favorite characters gay, i´m sorry but one of the things i enjoy about Gambit is his constant struggle for Rogue and seeing Women who obviously could do Xander harm end up trying to kill him or screw him, sometimes both, i am not anti gay, in fact i have a friend who is bi, of course that gets his butt into a LOT of weird situations we find humorous and annoying but i digress, i am afraid i must stop here you were okay with me up until this point, please don´t take offense i think you are a good writer but i am not a fan of this genre, if at some point their is non slash then you´ll hear from me again, in the meantime good luck and godspeed.
Review By [Kaosreign
] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CageFire
Sigh, dang it. If you're going to put slash in it, then please mark it as such so it doesn't show up in my search results. It's not that I have anything against homosexuals, but I really don't want to watch/read it. They can do whatever they want in private, but I don't want to be forced to watch. I feel the same way towards obese, ugly, and elderly people. It's wonderful that they found somebody to love, but I really find them highly unattractive and don't want to watch.
I'll give it a few more chapters, but if you're intending to get any more graphic about it, or making it a major part of the story, please let me know so I can remove it from my alerts, because it just ruins the story for me. There's only so much I can skip over before it becomes pointless to even read the story.
I've had that problem with stories in the past, where the summary /claims/ a really interesting plot, and then they turn it into a slash smut fic, under the guise of "romance", and I didn't see almost any sign of the plot that drew me to try that story in the first place. I have tried repeatedly to read slash fics that had an interesting plot, trying very hard to just ignore the parts I really didn't want to read, but every single time it has just been ruined for me.
The rather hypocritical part is that I have to force myself to admit that if it was a good straight pairing I would actually maybe liked the fics(or maybe tolerated based on how it was done), but that's only because I could actually get some entertainment value out of such a pairing, while slash pairings just seem gross to me. Once again, I'm not prejudice, but I don't have to get off on it either. I swear there's some people out there who think "Oh, you hate gay pairings, you must hate gay people." If anybody is prejudice it's them.
Comments from author:
ok I can see this is obviously a touchy subject so I'll tell you that I already have the whole story planned out. There will most likely not be aything more han the kiss that was in the last chapter. Also i did add the slash to the story warning when i actually determined that it was going to be in the story after plotting the story out. Sorry you didn't catch it. I will say that it will be a part of the story but that there will be no smut in the story. Xander will most likely not get with anyone. If there is anything it will be in a sequel and i'll be sure to put a warning in the summary.
Review By [CageFire
] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated