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Review of chapter "Cards on the Table" from RafMereC
Review:
Nice try at seducing Faith.

I think Faith should have come on a little stronger. put a little bit of fear into the girl... but that's just me.

Great over all

Raf
Comments from author:
Haha thanks :P
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Plan Begins" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Looks like trouble in Bree and Faith's new relationship. Now if only those two were known for acting rationally in crisis times, then Danielle and Andrew's plan would be sure to fail. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Well it's pretty obvious that they aren't going to have an easy time :') from what we know from Bree's past relationships, Faith will most likely somehow end up dead... I'll try not to let it get that far :P
Thanks for reviewing :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [20 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An interesting evening" from RafMereC
Review:
I like the kids' reactions.

The clifferhangger caught me off guard.

I would have thought the Council by this time fixed Faith's issues with the Law.

Raf
Comments from author:
Yeah I didn't think that the kids would be particularly happy about Faith coming into their lives that way and I wanted to see how Faith would actually fit into in Bree's world.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [13 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An interesting evening" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Talk about 'it never rains but it pours'...

Still, at least Faith and Bree are OK as far as their relationship with each other goes, and Bree reconciling with Andrew certainly worked; the only question now is if Faith's willing to call Angel for help getting out of this mess (Assuming this is set while he's still in control of Wolfram & Hart).
Comments from author:
Haha very true :P thanks for reviewing. I just felt things were starting to move quite slowly and predictably so I wanted to stir the story up a bit.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [13 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unspoken words" from RafMereC
Review:
How unique. Using mutual adult level understanding.

Didn't see that coming. Nice twist. LOL.

Good one.

Raf
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
I think that it was the right way for the story to go. I don't think it would have been very realistic if they had ended things on a completely happy note.
The next chapter will focus on the return of Bree's children and their reaction to Faith so stay tuned! :P
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new experience" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
The concept might be simple, and the writing style could do with a little work- particularly when it comes to spacing out the sentences in some places-, but there’s some interesting potential here that I wouldn’t say no to seeing explored in more detail.

Just one point; it MIGHT be worth having Bree consider how her children would react to the idea of her and Faith, considering her own prior stance on that kind of relationship...

Pairing-wise, I think Bree would be the better choice; Buffy and Faith have too much baggage- and there’s no way of knowing how much of Buffy’s feelings are just brought about by straightforward tension from prolonged time together-, whereas Bree’s feelings, while less old, seem to be more focused on Faith as FAITH rather than Faith as a Slayer or partner in the war against vampires.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [2 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A new experience" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Normally I always root for a Buffy/Faith relationship, although seeing this IS a BtVS/Desperate Housewives crossover, I think I will vote for Faith/Bree just to read a new approach. Besides there are hundreds if not thousands of Buffy/Faith stories on the Internet already.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and thanks to anyone else who has reviewed also! I really appreciate your feedback. It's nice to know where everyone wants the story to be taken and now I can decide whether to agree with you or do the exact opposite... I'll probably just decide as I go along ;)
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A new experience" from RafMereC
Review:
Good chapter.

I think over time Faith would be better off with Bree.

Buffy has too much emotinal baggage. The tension between Faith and Buffy has always been there. From the beginning in fact. If you want to make them friends with benifits... okay. The long run Faith is better off with Bree.

I just think that leading the life they're in wouldn't make for a lasting relationship. Basically Faith is the gasoline and Buffy is the blowtorch. When they meet... You get the idea.

Raf
Comments from author:
You're probably right. There is a reason I made this a Bree/Faith fic originally. Honestly, I didn't even expect Buffy to enter into the story at all, let alone have feelings for Faith but it just seemed to fit as I went. I really wanted to write at least one kiss between them otherwise I think it would have been unresolved. They have a lot of chemistry but I agree that their history does confuse things. Thank you for giving me some idea of what you think should happen. I guess it'll all get sorted next chapter...
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A new experience" from jormunguard
Review:
I'ld have to choose Bree for the final relationship. Buffy and Faith's personalities would probably make them good for each other in the short term, but eventually it would drive them apart. Where I can see Bree being a much longer and deeper relationship.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A new experience" from BalanceofGrey
Review:
Definitely Bree. Buffy and Faith would eventually implode, because of all the things between them, and they're too alike. Bree and Faith would be good for each other, they would balance each other.
Review By [BalanceofGrey] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decisions" from RafMereC
Review:
nice
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The morning after" from RafMereC
Review:
Great story over-all.

Been following it from the beginning.

Keep it up, and thank you for a cool story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review :)
Im pleased you like the story. It's encouraging to know and keeps me adding chapters. I WILL finish it! I'm determined not to just leave it uncompleted so definitely keep going with it :) thanks again!
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The morning after" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Well, Buffy is sure acting like a class A bitch in this story. Perhaps Bree needs to assert her more mature self and have a serious conversation with her and Faith. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing :) Yes Buffy is acting pretty bitchy but that will all be explained later on. In my opinion, she wouldn't have forgiven Faith for everything yet so she acts a bit out of character with her. Please continue with the story! Thanks again
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "My hero" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
An interesting pairing and a funny crossover with lot of potential. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for commenting :) I'm glad you like the pairing. I always just thought that no two characters are more different than Faith and Bree and that it would be pretty funny to put them together. It may not seem like it but they will end up together :P
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to Wisteria Lane" from jormunguard
Review:
Interesting start. I personally haven't see more than a couple eps of Desperate Housewives but the concept for this story looks like it could be good, I'm curious to see where you go with it.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing! this makes posting fanfiction much more interesting :)
Keep going with my story. It may look like it isn't really going anywhere but it will! (at some point...) also keep watching desperate housewives. It's a brilliant show (and you'll probably get more out of my fic ;P) thanks again for reviewing.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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