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Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
love this story and would love to see more of it
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [7 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Prophecy" from Shadowman
Review:
A very nice story that is highly enjoyable, but a mean place to stop. Please continue soon.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [21 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from jjordan
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I've just reread this story for the fifth or sixth time. I would REALLY like to see more of it. You have one of the best non-evil Snape characterizations, I agree with the other reviewers about the snark, and I'd really like to see the plot line develop.
Review By [jjordan] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from MMWillow
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I'm sure I've said it before but one of my favorite aspects of this story is the way you write snark!
Comments from author:
why thank you. I do love snark :)
Review By [MMWillow] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Letters Received part one" from DragonBard
Review:
How did the demons in the bar know that Faith was pregnant when 'Faith' didn't know she was pregnant?

Snape overheard them talking about how Xander had 'knocked up' Faith and she was taking it out on the demons, but this chapter is set after that.
Comments from author:
Certain demons can sense the pregnancy hormones coming off Faith. The Demons were only assuming she was angry and taking it out on them because she was pregnant. it was actually because she was bored and antsy. the Demon world is as full of gossips as the human world so they all gossip about the fact that The White Knight and The Dark Slayer are together and reproducing.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from BloodClover
Review:
Lovin' this, although I'm a bit lost as to how Daphne/Callie got shoved backwards in time. Was it the Watchers? Deathmunchers? Dr. Who?
Comments from author:
it's a secret. XD
Review By [BloodClover] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from Bill
Review:
Great to see more of this!
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Bill] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from sistercity
Review:
The story is great but you need to turn off your autocorrect function, it is changing Blaise to Blasé. There are multiple instances of it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for pointing that out. I'm pretty sure I fix all of them.
Review By [sistercity] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from Ember
Review:
Finally an update, I cant wait to see How Daphne reacts to her real parents, please update soon, I crave updates like coffee! Great story
Comments from author:
thank you. I make no promises other than it won't take six months for the next update.
Review By [Ember] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from iamastory
Review:
yay yay at last u updated!!! i did a happy dance when i saw the update!!!! totally loved how u got most of the students!!! cant wait for more! update soon!! please and thank u
:)
Comments from author:
Well thank you. it'll hopefully get updated more frequently from now on.
Review By [iamastory] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from ChaosLady
Review:
Nice.
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from spikesplayfulpet
Review:
Another great chapter :) I liked the flow and the way everyone is starting to interact. I can't wait to see what daphne s reaction is to the news about faith and zander. Thanks for the update and I will be awaiting the next.
Comments from author:
thank you.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 29" from spikesplayfulpet
Review:
I found this story just looking around the site and I wanted to say that I really enjoy it. I like how everyone except for dawn and connor so far are related to a main character in the potter verse, I also like how you bought narcissa and draco back into the black fold. I hope u continue this story as I would be sad to see it end here. Keep up the great writing, I will be awaiting the next update.
Comments from author:
almost done with the next chapter but I've had a lot of trouble with it. I lost the first draft back in January when my flash drive died. then when I had it about half way rewritten my laptop got hacked and I lost it a second time. this time it went in a totally different direction but I like it better. it's currently at a little over two thousand words so it should be done soon.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 23" from DragonBard
Review:
Don't remember when Giles and Dawn tried to kill Xander.
Comments from author:
I think I said Giles was the only one that hasn't but Dawn tasered Xander while he was driving. Not an actual attempt on his life but it could have killed them both if he crashed.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Prophecy" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
love this hope to see it continued soon keep up the good work
Comments from author:
there will be more eventually. I've been having a shitty and expensive year so far. My flashdrive died, got lasik(expensive as hell but totally worth it), had my laptop hacked by an actual person that was leaving me creepy messages before he downloaded a virus, had to pay two hundred bucks for geek squad to fix my baby and I finally got it back yesterday. O_o But I promise there will be more
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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