Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MBB
Like it's master story, it does't get enough reviews/
I had it saved last year to read on my summer holiday and only found it back recently.
I like Xander using Anya's name as a tactic.
If he'd used it during First date it might have worked, the demon could have figured that whatever Anya was planning for Xander was of such a degree of evil that The First would be willing to delay the apocalypse for a few weeks. :-P
interestingly, your other reviewers are expecting revenge against Anya, while I was reading it as vengence on Anya's behalf agains the guy that got her killed
(and possibly a setup to unite against the first or dhoffryn)
Review By [MBB
] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eureka
What in the world did Anya do to her????
Review By [Eureka
] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SlowMercury
Very intriguing beginning! I like your take on Marlena. As for Xander's strategy for screening women before even attempting to date anyone... it's hilarious. Although I have to guess that if any supernatural girls are specifically after him Xander-the-Council-guy rather than Xander-that-random-guy-in-the-bar, mentioning Anya's not going to disconcert them.
I look forward to finding out what Anya did to Marlena, so I hope to see more of this soon!
Review By [SlowMercury
] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from xxmagex
Okay, kinda of interested now, just what did Anya do to get such a reaction
Review By [xxmagex
] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Not Rated