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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Dragonelf
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I hope you will get inspired to turn this into a series or at least be inspired to write a sequel to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Strawberry Chocolate Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from CageFire
Review:
Interesting new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :) It looks like this story is marked as complete. Is this the end, or will it be continued in another fic?
Comments from author:
Originally this was just planned for defending from the wraith for thhis episode. Due to how popular its been I have considerd making this a series though a story for every few episodes so I don't feel overwhelmed. Only time will tell.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [12 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from MarcusSLazarus
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Short-ish story, but definitely an effective one; the interaction between the two groups as Atlantis and the SGC accept their mutant 'allies' even if the politicial issues mean that they have to accept them being 'press-ganged' into service is definitely effective, and I wouldn't say no if you decided to continue the story.

Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Honestly didn't expect this fic to be so popular I only wanted to deal with defending Atlantis. I'll think about continuing it though, maybe toss some ideas around and rewatch some SGA episodes and see what comes up. Maybe a series, dealing with a handful of episodes at a time so I don't get overwhelmed maybe.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [12 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chap 3" from rivrgrl
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awesome. keeping track of all the various battles is hard work but you've accomplished it wonderfully. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [rivrgrl] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chap 3" from CageFire
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This is an interesting story. I kinda hope that one military guy gets punched out or something.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 2" from DarthPayne
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Oh man, that Genai rep is *really* stupid.

I wonder how many of the Genai will survive.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 2" from AllenPitt
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I also wonder how Magneto would deal with Replicators --are they composed of ferrous material, etc? Hm, I wonder if any of the mutants could recharge the ZPMs --maybe Havok? Some of them can emit a heck of a lot of energy.. and if they could get those suckers fully charged, that'd be a game changer.
If Xavier isn't "saved", if something happens to him, things could get real ugly.
Comments from author:
I think a mutant would have to be able to emit Zero Point energy, no mutants use that. Havok while powerful uses cosmic energy makes one wonder if he could super charge or depower the FF though. No Replicators will be making an appearance in this fic so i don't have to come up with an answer to that one. I would imagine that given enough time that Magneto could manipulate them into his own soldiers or something.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 2" from jormunguard
Review:
Excellent beginning, can't wait to see where you go with this. Did have a good laugh at the idea of making Magneto the representative to the Genai.
Comments from author:
What can I say, I'm a big fan of aggressive negotiation. Glad your enjoying the tale.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chf
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I liked it. It would be interesting to see the effects of their prejudice when their allies find out what they did.

If you ever decide on an omake, you could have Squirrel Girl somehow take down a hive, standing triumphantly over the beaten form of a Queen.
Review By [Chf] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Annadel
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Intriguing idea. I look forward to more.
Review By [Annadel] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusSLazarus
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An intriguing idea, certainly; I look forward to seeing how it develops (Particularly your ideas about those with the ATA Gene or Teyla being considered 'mutants' as well; I just hope Elizabeth and the others are enough to remind them that not everyone thinks the same way as the people who 'press-ganged' them into Pegasus).

Although this is one point I have to wonder about; can Magneto do anything to the Wraith ships, or does their organic nature include a complete absence of anything metallic he could use his powers on?
Comments from author:
A Wraith Dart appears to be made of a type of organic metal similar to Colossus skin while a Hive ship is made up of a more organic flesh. So in my story he'll be able to affect Darts but not Hives.

At least that's the excuse I'm going with.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rivrgrl
Review:
OMG!! *shakes head out of stupor* completely frellin' awesome..
Review By [rivrgrl] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Hope to see more of this story soon!
Comments from author:
What would ya say if I were to tell ya the whole thing is already written?
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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