Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DesitaniaFReview:
(looks at female best friend) "He knows too much, we have to kill him."
"Nah don't do that, the stories are too good to stop"
"Well, I guess you have a point. He'll stay alive as long as there are new stories."
"Deal."
Comments from author:
Wow.
Luckily, I have one more story, so that'll buy me another twenty-four hours.
Nobody's gonna find me after that. (I hope.)
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DesitaniaF] • Date [1 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
VillageOrchidReview:
The xx group mind???
Comments from author:
Normal human females have two X-chromosomes (XX) in their DNA.
Big Mother is watching you.
Review By [
VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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phoukaReview:
Very interesting premise. Who's next? Matter-Eating Lad? I always thought he was an under-utilized character.
Review By [
phouka] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
WildMartinReview:
The last paragraph is a little difficult to understand, you might want to try re-writing it. Other than that, extremely amusing. Looking forward to the next installment.
Review By [
WildMartin] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
