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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from meteoricshipyards
Review:
Nice beginning. I expected Harry to be another agent, not Jimmy Palmer, but it has promise and I'm looking forward to how it all fits together.

Thanks for the story.

Tom A.
Comments from author:
When this idea first struck, I was surprised when I checked and found no one had used this idea before.

And thanks for reviewing.
Review By [meteoricshipyards] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from BlueEyedBrigadier
Review:
Huh...so I'm not alone in thinking that Brian Dietzen's Jimmy Palmer on "NCIS" is an adult Harry Potter with some minor cosmetic charms applied, eh? Excellent! Though Neville and Seamus showing up to tell him something horrific has happened relating to the events of Book Five's climax at the Department of Mysteries? Not so excellent.

I do have to wonder about these mysterious invaders though...because I have an inkling it involves the Stargate, but I can't see the SGC would be so crazy hostile unless they discovered something hinky. And with the Ministry involved, I suspect hinkiness to be epic!
Comments from author:
Anytime the Ministry is involved, you need to suspect hinkiness.

And sometimes, even it they're not. ;-)
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Starfox
Review:
Interesting start, though it looks like Hermione was killed off already, since she doesn't get mentioned and she and Ron would have been the first choice to talk to Harry. Hopefully she's just gone from Britain too.
Comments from author:
More information about who's still around and what happened in the Ministry will be in the next chapter.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Cateagle
Review:
Whoa, things seem to have really gone bad, without even a handbasket to travel in. I suspect there's one whole hell of a lot of backstory yet to tell that's going to make for all sorts of interesting hearing/reading. Methinks some very interesting folks will get involved, too, and more than one set of secrets revealed to select persons, Harry most definitely being among them (he does seem to be quite the "chaotic attractor").
Comments from author:
Harry is a freaking chaos *vortex*!!! 0.0

And yes, there's a lot of back story you'll be seeing in the next chapter, and it'll help explain exactly why Jimmy Palmer is actually Harry Potter.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written sense of mystery.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

My muse has been rubbing her hands and snickering while I write this. I'm not sure whether that's a good sign or not. ;-)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Neverwillmini
Review:
You have me interested in seeing 1) what happened in the past, and 2) what the idiot wizards have done now. 'Jimmy' should request a HUGE payment from the Wizards to fix whatever they screwed up this time (they only seem to respect/listen to what hurts their vaults).

Be interesting to see the NCIS group's reaction if 'Jimmy' slips and a bit of Harry comes out (accent, reaction time, etc.).
Comments from author:
More history will be revealed in the next chapter.

And Harry has *enormous* leverage at the moment, because he is quite literally indispensable to this situation. He eitehr gets what he asks for,or things go down the tubes in a *big* way.

Just because he's been quiet and staying in the background does not mean he's stupid and can't handle the situation.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AnFan
Review:
If there is a coherent plot here, I haven't seen any signs of it :)

Though I will give you the benefit of the doubt. Though, if this devolves into a mystery I'll probably stop tracking it. Can't stand mystery stories.

Lots of opportunity for interesting things. You caught me off with the mention of Luna's relationship though. I'm wondering if that was due to some plans you have, or if it was just out of left field. A red herring so to speak.
Comments from author:
There is no long-term mystery. Everything is simply to provide background for what Harry is being called back to help out with.

At present, I'm estimating that there are another three or four chapters left in this.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Selias
Review:
"Luna Fetch-Finchley."

I'm pretty sure that should be "Finch-Fletchley."
Comments from author:
You're correct.

It's the Nargles' fault.
Review By [Selias] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LostDragon
Review:
"Merlin's Beard" you come up with great story ideas but please finish a story or two. Your killing me!!!
Comments from author:
I write to suit myself and to follow my muse's commands.

The majority of my stories are complete.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
Okay, not much to go on, but you've got my interest. At first, I thought this was a follow up to the short where Harry was going by the name Rupert Giles and Hermione and a few others confronted him in the Magic Box.

red
Comments from author:
I vaguely remember that story, but I lost track of it and can't remember if it was even finished.
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from leb
Review:
thank you for the update
Comments from author:
You're welcome.

Thanks for reviewing and telling me you enjoyed it.
Review By [leb] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Harry as the ncis autopsy gremlin
Interesting
Comments from author:
When my muse came up with this idea, I was astonished that no one had done this sort of story before.

So I did. ;-)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from raxadian
Review:
Well, magical terrorists, wonderful.
Comments from author:
Ah, but keep in mind that one person's freedom fighter is another person's terrorist.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
Well, let's see how this goes.
Comments from author:
Considering how Harry's luck runs, badly, is the most likely direction. ;-)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Again with the evil! I do hope that you write a sequel to this as I really want to know why Harry's to former classmates are looking for him.
Comments from author:
As I noted when I posted it, my muse only gave me a brief glimpse into that particular worldline. I've got some ideas about how it might be developed, but they're still simmering in the back of my head.
Review By [twlight] • Date [28 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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