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Review of chapter "The Force Shall Set Me Free" from Cristina
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Mine take on Sith code is a bit different (wanna know I'll PM you) but yours work OKey :)
And reading that I got it in my head with Buffy first meting with a Jedi...Jedi kill the droids that give them trouble, panting heavily.

"You can not escape or win Sith!"
then jadi stares at Buffy.
Buffy, "Is this this the part when I say something, OKey, Blah, bla bla blabla.The Dark side. blah blah.My pans will be DONE mawahahaha.There you happy!"
Proceeds to kick the living crap out of them.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [5 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Force Shall Set Me Free" from GypsyDruid
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This is practically BEGGING to be continued. In a series, perhaps?
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Force Shall Set Me Free" from ChefJackButler
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So there remains hope that she's not inevitably corrupted.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Force Shall Set Me Free" from DarthTenebrus
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Everyone interprets the Sith Code differently. You have impressed me with your analysis and internalization. You have made it a part of you, and it shall reward you as it did Darth Corusca. And when she returns to the world of Before, the world of Earth, with the new power she wields now, the time of reckoning will come at last, and a new Master will dominate the Hellmouth and make it her domain to rule as she sees fit.

Well done with the closing. I think you may have inspired me to write a sequel to this for the Fic-a-Day this year. With your permission, of course. ..
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Force Shall Set Me Free" from raxadian
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Buffy is dangerous just with her Slayer skills, add the dark side of the force, and she will be a very dangerous monster.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unnatural Selection" from raxadian
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He s a fool, all that getting deep in dark side will do for Buffy will do is make her like the First slayer, only with more control.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Worthy of Survival" from raxadian
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More like as Sith, she is an animal, desperate for survival.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unnatural Selection" from Dmitri
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This was a very impressive tale. Sith Buffy is always an enjoyable read and this one kicks ass. (And if she ever learned that it was her friends who got her out of Heaven and into this mess - the asses will be theirs.)
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unnatural Selection" from WolfWriter
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The man is an idiot.

If anyone is toying with someone, it's Corusca that's doing it with him.

The Slayer is a patient beastie these days; perfectly content to sit back, learn what she has to, and then pounce on the one doing the hurting. Sure she'll be subtler than Darth Maul; she'll also kill Sidious' wrinkled keister when she's had enough of his crap.

If she can survive the Master, Glory, The Mayor, the End of Sunnydale, Angelus, etc. she can take him.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unnatural Selection" from carrytoomuch
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Hey! You checked 'completed' by mistake. This should be the start of a very long story.
Review By [carrytoomuch] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unnatural Selection" from Iceflame
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The thing that strikes me here, he's assuming she's weaker then Anakin. Less trained, certainly, but I'd figure a Slayer, especially one as....determined as Buffy might become a monster even 'Vader' might find to be too powerful to match :).

Then again, she wouldn't need to be more powerful whenever the clash came. All she'd have to be is strong enough to SURVIVE, which seems to be her main mantra right now :). Considering Anakin's impending lava drop, a lot of his Force strength will be diverted towards survival after that battle; which would put them much more 'even'.

Either road, or a combination of the two would be a wild ride >:).
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unnatural Selection" from (Past Donor)akat
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I guess I didn't expect Sith training to be all gatorade baths and high fives, but... *shudder* Well done, kerry! I'm really interested to see where this goes -- and what Buffy is thinking through all this!
Review By [(Past Donor)akat] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Worthy of Survival" from burmafrdnow
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depressing. really depressing.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Worthy of Survival" from Kaleidofox
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Oh so lovely, as usual. I would love to see more of this. I do so love when authors show us a darker Buffy, made by her circumstances.
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Worthy of Survival" from BrownFinderth
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Scheming is good!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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