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Review of chapter "Sunday Evening" from Gideon
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Trust is something that is crucial to friendship so I'm not surprised that Buffy is having problems relating to Willow at present. The fact that they will know each others thoughts from now on won't make it easy to regain that trust either. Still, the sooner they start the sooner they can rebuild their friendship, and it isn't like they have any choice in the end :(
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Contemplations" from bookworm
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Good to see more of this story, and indeed, some useful contemplation from everyone. Looking forward to wherever this goes!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Contemplations" from Gideon
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It seems Willow's problem is at least partly of her own making. I hope Xander is able to be there for her even if Willow doesn't want to share all the details with him too!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Contemplations" from Riniko
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Nice to see a new chapter of this interesting story. Buffy will need to get over herself and allow Willow to apologize before they can make any progress. It is not like she has not made some serious mistakes herself, she is just to full of herself to see them, but with the others view on her she should start to get a clue. Cordelia's at least thinking ahead, but her wealth will not last unless they move it away from her father's control so that it can't get seized. But, she is right to think that their may be some future tech that they can make, at least Willow may have a better idea on how to make this work.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Going Separate Ways" from draconis
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Good story. Much more serious than I anticipated it would be. I'm a bit concerned it's going to get muddled down in psycho-analyses. Would prefer to just see them 'deal with it' for a short bit and then move on to their shared future.

What is the significance of the anti-grav ring not being buildable? Since Cordy still can apparently fly, does that mean there is only one working ring and she has it...or that only Cordy retained that power...or all 3(4) women can fly, etc?

From the relatively fast and easy acceptance by Joyce of the supernatural, it would seem all that really happened is that the Sunnyhell Syndrome barriers were dropped. She must have known subconsciously what was really going on and Giles' and the revelation simply catalyzed the acceptance. Having Joyce "read-in" to the situation is a good move by the author, regardless.

Looking forward to more...esp finding out why B appears so ticked off at the others and/or herself. I think I know, but we'll see.
Review By [draconis] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going Separate Ways" from jormunguard
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Good update and I'm definitely interested in seeing where you go with this. One thing though, please don't make the stupidity of saying Willow was pushing Buffy towards Angel to keep her away from Xander. I'm so tired of seeing this idea, I mean if Buffy had shown even the slightest interest in Xander beyond the love spell I might accept the idea, but she never did even when they were both single and Willow had a boyfriend.

Edit: Sorry for using the wrong word. And you are correct it's not stupid its bad writing. Creating a point of contention between two characters with out having some basis for the contention shown either earlier in the show or the story. And Buffy had already fallen for Angel before Willow had even met him. However, you are correct it is your story to write as you like.
Comments from author:
I don't see that as stupidity since the only time both Buffy and Xander were single, i.e. free of significant others or not recovering from break ups with same, was the first two episodes of Season 4. At this point in time Willow is still pining for Xander and Buffy has been trying to help Willow put herself out ther so Xander will see her as girlfriend material. Considering Xander threatened Buffy, and she believed him, if Willow got hurt at the beginning of Season 2 and taking Xander from Willow at this time would hurt Willow I doubt Buffy would risk that.

As for the issues between Buffy and Willow in my story, you'll either agree with what I write or you won't. I know I can't plese everyone all the time.

BTW - It's 'accept' not 'except'.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Going Separate Ways" from CastorandPollux
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Excellent...
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going Separate Ways" from Gideon
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Yeah Buffy seems pretty mad about something! What could Willow have done to upset her so much? I hope she hasn't been spying on Buffy in the shower or something? And do they still have three flight rings or just one?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going Separate Ways" from borgrabbit
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Say it in seventeen vowels...haiku!:

Strong coincidence
Thunderous correlation
Explain again truth

>^.^< Meow, meow. >^.^<

☺☺☺☺☺☺☺>^.^
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Going Separate Ways" from Greywizard
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First off, it's nice to see more of this one, man. ;-)

And is the problem between Buffy and Willow the fact that now Buffy knows that Willow was pushing her towards Angel, in order to keep her away from Xander?

THAT would definitely cause some friction, after finding out that your supposed 'best friend' was manipulating you for their own purposes. ;-(
Comments from author:
That is a small part of it.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Introducing Laura Clark" from RafMereC
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Nice handling of the merged personalities. I like the fact that you used Laura Kent, or Laura Clark as the name for her cover.

Are you going to give them all slayer powers, or are you going to blend who gets what?

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introducing Laura Clark" from Gideon
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Awesome! They can split into three separate people still! As long as they don't all look identical Sunnydale Syndrome should cover any changes from the previous appearance of Buffy, Willow and Cordelia. Interesting that the girls have some serious issues between themselves. I guess having access to the entire memory of one of your friends could bring up any number of issues. I hope none of them attack one of the others once they are separate! If Laura is recommending time apart there must certainly be some strong feelings!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yes, magic is real" from SamTurner
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This should really confuse her. :)
Nice.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yes, magic is real" from Riniko
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As the three girls are in their single body currently, Joyce may be looking for her daughter for a few seconds before demanding to see her. I would guess, that is would be about that time that they awake and split into three in front of her eyes. If finding out that your daughter is the Slayer is not shock enough, that should be enough to leave Joyce believing in magic and wanting to kill a certain chaos mage.
Comments from author:
Killing would be too merciful.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yes, magic is real" from Gideon
Review:
Well Joyce has been pretty calm so far, I hope that continues now that she has found Buffy. I also hope that she has not just arrived in time to watch her daughter suffer a painful death from spontaneous human combustion or anything :(
Comments from author:
Joyce is the only one in danger of doing something spontaneous. THough I think it might be more of an explosikon than bursting into flame. The fall out wouldn't be pretty either way.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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