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The Man in the Eyepatch

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
This was pretty funny.

Was "rapist Xander" a Private Practice reference?
Comments from author:
Thanks, and yeah.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Great work, any chance of a sequal?
Comments from author:
Not really.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Enjoyed that very much. Thank you :)
Comments from author:
You're welcome, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lilykep
Review:
Why'd you use the creepy rapist from private practice instead of the charmingly nerdy tech analyst from criminal minds as xander's doppleganger?
Comments from author:
I dunno. Why not?
Review By [lilykep] • Date [17 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from warfolomei
Review:
Ha.. funny, short and actually well characterized.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And am especially pleased by the 'well characterised' comment.
Review By [warfolomei] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
Good job on the characterizations. All the dialogue was totally in character. I love Lily's fantasy of her doppelgangers getting together. LEGENDARY!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the recommendation!
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from solo
Review:
Absolute perfection with your characterization, I can see everyone reacting exactly the way you portrayed them. Your story made my day, great job!! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [solo] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Review:
This was freaking hilarious!! It really felt like the HIMYM crew and how they would act/react and I think you did an awesome job with Faith and Xander as well. I especially loved Barney though :)

Very well done short fic! Thanks for writing!!
Comments from author:
Thank You, being told that everyone is in character is pretty much the best review I can get!

Thanks for reading
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
That was Legen...wait for it...dary! Was Rapist Xander from Pyscho Beach Party?
Comments from author:
I think it was from 'Private Practise' where Nicholas Brendon played a rapist for a few episodes.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Nicely done. ;-)

But what show/movie/series featured Doppelganger!Xander?
Comments from author:
Thanks, and it was Private Practise.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
It wasn't bad...but you should have had Lesbian Lily(Willow) drop in at just the wrong moment and make out with Faith.
Comments from author:
Eh, to each his own. Personally though, I prefer the Xander/Faith pairing, and besides, Willow dropping into MacLaren's has been done quite a bit already.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
A few dopplegangers always make for a good story :) And I think Xander is right that Faith got off easy, but then again, a cheerleader Faith is probably her worst nightmare.
Comments from author:
That's what I was thinking, and thanks for the review.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cdog
Review:
Having all the doppelgangers meeting each other would be a hilarious series of one-shots. Buffy meeting Katherine. Faith meeting Tru Davies. I wonder what Spike would say about meeting a doppelganger that was more of a threat than he ever was.
Comments from author:
Spike'd probably get into a fight with him anyway for the sheer hell of it.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jormunguard
Review:
Good short story, I could see the characters saying and acting exactly the way you showed. Good job.
Comments from author:
Thanks, that's what I was going for.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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