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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Starfox
Ah, if in doubt, hit the macho guy. Slayer beats were.
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [2 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lunalurker
It's amazing how a werewolf can be even more of an arrogant jerk than a vampire, but in this universe, somehow they manage it.
I'd get a headache and leave too!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
I don't think I've ever read a Buffy story that involves Mercedes. I enjoyed the quirkiness of it!!!
Comments from author:
:) Thanks! It's hard to mesh up the worlds completely, but Buffy and Co. interacting with the characters is pretty fun to write.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)akat
kerry, I love, love, LOVE THIS!!! :D Seriously, this was perfect, from Buffy's observations to Charles' reaction to her. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
From the person who got me liking the idea of them as a couple, this is high praise indeed. :) I do need to figure out what happens next, though. Since they really don't like each other right now. Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Past Donor)akat] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
yeah I can see how that would be frustrating for Buffy, she drives all that way and doesn't even get to fight!
Comments from author:
I know, right? At least give the girl something to slay. ;) Thanks for the review!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
I love the Mercy verse! Great job at twisting them together for this short! :)
Comments from author:
:) Thanks! Charles is hard to write, but I blame akat for getting me hooked on the idea of them as a pairing. Glad you liked it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Ava
You always have some of the best shorts during the August challenge. It makes me extremely happy that you participate. :)

I like the reminder of Cain and Buffy assuming Charles might be just like him. The mistrust rings true, especially after the year she's had. I also like that she was there to try and help while Charles was there to merely kill. It was a nice distinction and fun to see Buffy as the one there to help the monster rather than destroy it. I hope to see more of this verse.
Comments from author:
*blushes* Ah, thank you Ava! I'm glad you like them!

I was thinking about the times that Buffy's encountered werewolves, and it seems like her first response is to tranq them and make sure that they don't harm anyone. I thought that it made a nice contrast to Charles and his role as his father's enforcer. The Cain assumption just kind of slid right in there after that. :)

There's going to be more. I just need to figure out future meetings and how it goes from there.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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