Review of chapter "Blurry Lines" from LeaFairy
This was really good! The whole premise is simply fascinating, and very original as well. You did an amazing job with Dawn's character and her reactions to waking up injured and finding out about the mix up with everyone thinking her as someone else, and "Dawn Summers" being actually dead - it was very well done. I do kinda wish for more though - to see what happens after Dawn gets out of the hospital, and how she adjust to living her new life - but I'm probably just being greedy :-/
Anyhoo, thanks for writing this - I really enjoyed it!!
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blurry Lines" from WildMartin
Cool fic, The medical people or police or whoever must have been real lazy to declare Dawn as dead just because of belongings in a a shared crash when the victims are so similar looking.
Review By [WildMartin
] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blurry Lines" from Bouquet
I really like the story :)
There are so few GG crossovers with Buffy and almost none of them are with Dawn but your story contains a lot of elements from both worlds for example abondment issues by parents (GG) and coincidences that are probably planned by the Powers That Be (Buffy)-but maybe I'm interpreting too much into the car crash ;).
I hope you keep on writing this story :)
Comments from author:
I'm leaving it as a one shot for now, but I may add to it later. I like to play with the relationships between people. The idea that Dawn would totally abandon her world and take over someone else's easier life interests me.
As for the coincidences, you will notice that in Dawn's dream, she is on the sidewalk, and she was actually found in the cab, so.....
Review By [Bouquet
] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated