Review of chapter "Chapter One" from buffyandspike
I actually kind of liked this :) It was sort and ended abruptly, but it was sweet. I think you should make it a bit longer. Maybe add some details that are not there. It seems like you had a really good idea, but it needed to be expanded. Good job so far.
Review By [buffyandspike
] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated