Seems like she's falling victim to Stockholm Syndrome. She does realize she's been kidnapped with intent to vamp her, right? . The 'rogues' are probably her friends searching for her.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
And then she forgot her passed life, just like she had when she landed in Buffy’s lap. She knew she must have lived a million different lives, but she could only remember her current life, and bits and pieces of her life with Buffy.
**Now THIS is a very cool story idea. I can just imagine Dawn living these millions of lives across multiple dimensions.
I definitely like the story. Its well written and interesting but there's something I'm terribly confused over. You just dropped Dawn in like it was nothing! Was it the portal she created in season 5 that Buffy pushed her in? Another random portal? Was she fighting with Buffy at the time? Is she on the outs with the rest of the Scooby gang? Those are some questions you don't answer and its creating some plot holes. The Scoobies were a HUGE part of Dawns life and it seem kinda unfair for you to cut them out without explanation. The way you have it, Dawn doesn't even miss them! Aside from that I really do think your story is awesome especially with such an original pairing.
Comments from author:
Everything you have brought up WILL be addressed in the future chapters. Thanks for the complements.
Review By [PowersBeDamned] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
I was wondering how you were going to get dawn to Romania and the kidnapping was perfect. I like the chemistry between dawn and Stefan. I am really liking the story and I wish you wrote faster because it is very good.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
ok I'll be brutally honest, I despise Twilight....BUT! and this is a bit but for me, I do enjoy this fic. Mainly due to the limited use of the Cullen family. I love Dawn fic's because simply put she was a young teen when the series ended so its fun to read about how the viewers might have wanted her to grow up. Stefan is a side character that wasn't explained about much, so a lot of who he is still a mystery that can be used by fanfic authors to explore him as a potential character.
Bravo on the fic so far. I can't wait to see where this goes and what you do with it.
Comments from author:
I love brutally honest! Thanks for the review.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated