Review of chapter "That's So......Ewwwwwww" from Gideon
Review:
Well I am glad that Buffy doesn't share Justin's opinion of her uncle! And I like the idea of Cordelia having to beg Buffy for forgiveness. I hope Buffy makes her work for it :)
Comments from author:
Thanks Gideon.
Got myself a beta so every chapter from now on will be evev better
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oh God Anything But That Part 2" from Gideon
Review:
Well that was just hilarious! And that last line was perfect :) I'm so glad someone put Cordy in her place, I hope you show her trying to suck up to Buffy in the next chapter!
Comments from author:
thanks for your comment
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oh God Anything But That Part 2" from JanessaRavenwood
Review:
LOL! *Sure* it is...they'll definitely buy that...
Review of chapter "Oh God Anything But That Part 1" from Gideon
Review:
Always interesting to see how people react to a cheerleading costume :) I can't believe Angel has a job! How does he avoid sunlight?
Comments from author:
See that is why i decided to make the chapter two parts. I wanted stuff to be explained. Then you will see how Marty i Angel and more Brian Buffy banter and of course Brian and Justin have to finally meet officially.
Review of chapter "How Was Your Night Part 2" from Gideon
Review:
I guess Jesse wasn't that great a boyfriend if Daphne is so ready to stake him! Then again, maybe uncle Charley was just really convincing :) I noticed a few errors in this chapter so you might want to watch out for that.
Comments from author:
Thanks. With an uncle like charles gunn he told her once a vampire kill kill kill. I hope this means you like it. New chapter tomorrow with some smut. after all its qaf right
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pittsburgh Has A What Now Part 2" from MegKF
Review:
Well I finally have energy to read new stories. This story is interesting. I was wondering how you were going to inter-weave the story. Moving the hellmouth? This has potential, although now I'm worried you're planning to off Justin since he seems to have filled the Jesse position. Also Justin's best friend hasn't made an appearance, her name escapes me, is she also not going to be in the story?
Comments from author:
Daphne she was in the first chapter. In the cafe. She was there. You can not have QAF without Brian and Justin
Review of chapter "Pittsburgh Has A What Now? Part 1" from slatergirl
Review:
I like your story so far but if you are just going to repeat everything that happened in the show then I am going to stop reading.
Comments from author:
Oh cool you can continue reading. No I will not be repeating everything that happened on the show. I mean gotta put the QAF stuff end so that wii change everything. Pittsburgh vamps are a bit more organized so yea its gonaa be fun
Review By [slatergirl] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Pittsburgh" from Dreamweaver
Review:
You think YOUR life is complicated, just wait until you get a gander at HER life.
Comments from author:
I hope that means you like it. More to come soon sorry for the shortness of this
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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