Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
vidiconReview:
1) I take it Willow and Daniel haven't married.
2) I agree with the analysis of butt-wipe, teachers should always inquire deeply and widely after such serious fights. And always in pairs.
3) Quite an age difference between Chris and Lucas.
4) Someone should clean under the bed more often.
thanks for writing
Comments from author:
If you're refering(sp?) to Josh's constant 'Miss-ing' then I guess people might think that too; but yes, those two are married- kids just 'Miss' any grown-up irrispective of their marital status (British kids usually do, not sure about American kids).
Yes, teachers are morons sometimes
yes, there's a six year age difference; which now I realise is the exact difference between Buffy and Dawn.
:D Someone should clean under the bed more, but I think they're a little overstretched- this toy-destructo thing will be addressed in a sequel ficlet.
Thank you, for reviewing!
Review By [
vidicon] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
fansickReview:
I foresee some problems up ahead.
Comments from author:
Yes, there will be.
This is actually a bridge to the sequel story that I've been trying to write
Thanks for the review
Review By [
fansick] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated