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Review of chapter "Chosen One" from bradsan
Review:
Hilarious. "Isn't that a band" and yes it is.

Wonder why Giles didn't know there are different kind of species. Even Dracula was a different one. So Giles, being a watcher, should have known about it and Buffy after Dracula should be aware of it. I don't think the watcher didn't learn about them. There are to many of them. What about the Werewolves they are different kind than Oz was. This one can change when there isn't a full moon.

Another thing Buffy isn't stupid and she doesn't live in that house alone. Why would she invite a vampire that she just met and don't know about in to their house. Doesn't make any sense. She doesn't know how dangerous they are, how to kill it etc. and yes Spike had access to her house but he and Angel are the only ones she ever invited in.

Sorry couldn't resist.

Great story and good writing never a dull moment. Great job.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [19 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chosen One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
good chapter. I like this but I do wish Buffy would meet someone she likes too. Have you considered a Jacob Buffy pairing? :) what can I say I long for vicarious smoochies LOL
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chosen One" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Liking this so far; one tiny little plot detail that I did pick up on was that she knew he was a vampire, and she still invited him into her home. Growing up in Sunnydale, or even learning to survive, meant never extending an open invitation into one's own home, so why'd she do it?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chosen One" from willowfaust
Review:
I am following several writers on this site, but you are the first I ever got an email notice about. thx.
Review By [willowfaust] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chosen One" from CindyB
Review:
I have a bumper sticker that reads "And then, Buffy staked Edward...The End." I hope this story ends that way too. The Twilight movie was just really, really horrible. I just couldn't force myself to watch any of the sequels.
Comments from author:
Then I would advise you read no further. It won't be ending that way.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations with dead people" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I am curious about where you would go with this one. it is too bad you don't seem to be continuing it.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations with dead people" from Emeraldfire
Review:
I hope you continue soon!!!!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conversations with dead people" from bradsan
Review:
Well ........ , that's cruel leaving it like that.
I hope for a update soon. good story, well written
Review By [bradsan] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations with dead people" from ChloeBlack
Review:
Loving it! :)


oh, and, a buffy/carlisle story would be AWESOME! :)
Review By [ChloeBlack] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Investigation" from ChloeBlack
Review:
Amazing! I can't wait for the next update! :)
Review By [ChloeBlack] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Investigation" from Clandestine
Review:
What an update! Can't wait to read the next part!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Investigation" from Frog
Review:
I’m liking this very much. It’s an interesting approach to leave Bella out but as I said: I like it. :D
Can’t wait for new chapter.
Review By [Frog] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A change is needed" from ChloeBlack
Review:
Love it! Can't wait for more! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! :)
Review By [ChloeBlack] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A change is needed" from efwrocks
Review:
Looking forward to the rest very much. Two things I found though.

“If you insist on leaving, I insist you left me help you. ..." I think you meant to have put let instead of left. Also,

'Let’s make my last nights in Sunnydale memorable.' I think you meant night instead of nights there.

I think you have a great story line so far, and this story has the potential to be absolutely amazing! (It already is in my opinion!)

Sincerely,

efwrocks :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I fixed the first mistake but I did mean 'nights' for the second. They weren't leaving instantly after Faith arrived, more like a few days after. Again, thanks for pointing them out!
Review By [efwrocks] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A change is needed" from Toniboo
Review:
hey, this is just gona be a quick review but i wanted to let you know that i am liking this so far, i think it has great potential. the only thing that isn't as good is the over use of the comma at the start but still as i said this fic looks like its going to be really good. am looking forward to your next chap

toniboo
xox
Comments from author:
When I first started writing I was told I didn't use the comma enough so I tried using it more and now it's too much haha. I'm trying to find a balance though because I did notice the large amount of commas in the first few chapters. Hopefully I'll be able to get it right in the later ones. Thank you so much for the review!
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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