Review of chapter "August 11, 2011 – She’s Full of Power" from AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
So funny! I like that Dawn got turned back into green energy by her own stupidity and childish impulsiveness. Serves her right. And she shouldn't whine (even mentally), 'cos she's now part of something much greater than herself, and she's helping to save the day...*snorts with laughter*
Comments from author:
Yeah, she really should know better - especially with Anya as a babysitter.
Review of chapter "August 11, 2011 – She’s Full of Power" from CageFire
Review:
Err, not exactly what I was expecting, funny I guess, or at the very least ironic.
Comments from author:
Well, I was going for ironic, so that's good.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "August 11, 2011 – She’s Full of Power" from Harry
Review:
*Shakes head* Dawn, you forgot one of the first lessons that B taught you: DO NOT USE THE WORD WISH! Now you are stuck as the sentient version of the Master Lantern on Oa. And no escape for you at all.
Comments from author:
But at least she can feel important now.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "August 11, 2011 – She’s Full of Power" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Nice twist! I was sort of expecting Dawn to become a member of the Green Lantern corps, but becoming the actual light source makes a lot of sense.
Comments from author:
Had to make the wish be something other than what she intended.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated