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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ThunderGod
I liked it...and you may get more one liner reviews on different stories, due to mood swings
Comments from author:

And reviews are always welcome. ;-)
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Oh, dear, the British wizarding world doesn't realize what it's unleashed (and I doubt it will until way too late) and I love the idea of a dangerously angered Hermione Granger serving in this capacity. BTW, I loved the tip o'the hat to Robert Heinlein (yes, I recognized where that bit came from) and found it most fitting in this use. I'm quite looking forward to sequels from this and seeing who she ends up working with and working against.
Comments from author:
Yeah, this was an idea I had for explaining why and how the British Wizarding World screwed itself over royally.

Not sure what more I'll do with it, or when it'll show up, but things will eventually end up back in London at the Ministry of Magical Idiocy, with an extremely irate Hermione Granger, backed by whichever allies she might have picked up along the way, demonstrating to the still-living purebloods why it is they're boned. ;-)
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [13 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Dark and complicated.
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Very true. Most things involving Wolfram and Hart are.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from superfan
I love your Hermione, SO MUCH.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed the story. I thought that this incarnation was a quite reasonable derivation of the canon character, when considering the events that took place in her life.
Review By [superfan] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
An excellent twist on what could have been the future in HP.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Things could easily have gone very wrong any number of times.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Pity that Harry and Ron didn't survive but at least most of Hermione's list of "Better off dead" now actually are :)
Comments from author:
I don't know that they're 'Better off,' considering where they're likely to end up, but they most definitely are 'dead.' ;-)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Very interesting, while I'll admit the backstory is a bit darker than I'm comfortable with when it comes to HP stories, I would be interested to see where you might take this one.

Comments from author:
At the moment, I'm not sure whether I'll get back to this before the end of the month, or not.

Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TaraLi
Interesting start, though I'm rather surprised at General Services having anything to do with WR&H. Those in charge of General Services really wouldn't put up with a lot of the things WR&H does.
Comments from author:
Well, in the original story, that would have been quite true, but in the Joss-verse, I don't believe he'd allow anyone to be as straight-laced as they were to exist.

Or, you coudl consider that W&H saw how well GS had done in other dimensions and simply stole the idea and the name to use in their own. (That sounds a lot more reasonable to me.)
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Don't you think it might be a good idea to mention the origin of the General Services organization specifically in your disclaimer, since you seem to have copied the ad verbatim from Heinlein's story?
Comments from author:
I had intended - and thought - I had mentioned where General Services originated, but obviously, didn't. Brain fart, I guess. ;-(

It's fixed now, and thanks for pointing that out.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from malkome
Oh wow... I can't help but want this Hermione to meet with a Xander that's been hardened by years of African horrors. It would end up with either both of them dead, or an unstoppable team.
Comments from author:
Well, that is a very intriguing, and also very disturbing, idea. 0-0
Review By [malkome] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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