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In The Niche Of Time

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
I'm not familiar with any series by that name, but there are a lot of them I don't know. I rather suspect that a lot of folk are going to be very unpleasantly surprised at what these six learn before they return to their line and time.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure which series you might be referring to, but the Time Variance Authority is an organization mentioned in various Marvel comics (mostly, the Fantastic Four), and the Panoptichron is another marvel concept, which was featured prominently in the 'Exiles' comic series.

And yes, the Ministry Six will be receiving training which is going to allow them to become major problems to all of the people who have been bedeviling them in the past.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Heh.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.

It's not just the Bad Guys (tm) who can cheat when it suits their purpose.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting. Would like to see more of this.
Comments from author:
I have more planned, it's just a matter of finding the time to write it up.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ampws
Review:
I at first thought Dr Who with Panopticon however TVA is Marvel through and through. I couldn't remember any marvel character with the name of the commando until I thought Buffy. So its going to be a Marvel/Buffy/HP crossover is it?

Fun!

Should be a read worth following if it is continued.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the story. And it was Actually a Marvel/BtVS/HP/SG-1 crossover.

The Buffy characters were Riley and Sam Finn (his wife from Season Six) and Amy Madison, Jennifer Hailey is from Stargate SG-1, and the others were all from Harry Potter. The ideas for the Time Variance Authority and the Panoptichron are Marvel's, although they've been massaged by me.

There will be more, eventually.
Review By [ampws] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kano
Review:
very good but who was rye supposed to be?
Comments from author:
Thanks. Rye is Riley Fin, Sam was his wife, Samantha Finn, Amy was Amy Madison and Jen was Jennifer Hailey, a character from Stargate SG-1
Review By [kano] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and fun crossover but I admit to having to look up the (to me, obscure) Marvel part.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Not bad. It sounds like a cross with Panoptichron from Marvel Comics.

http://marvel.wikia.com/Panoptichron

The extraction team consisted of one man and three women.

In command - Riley Finn

I'm tempted to say that the tall blonde was Samantha Finn.
It also could have been Samantha Carter.

Amy may be Amy Madison. It appears someone got to her before she went off the deep end.

I have no idea who Jen was.
Edit: Okay - I have two possibilities: Jennifer Hailey (Stargate:SG-1); Dr Jennifer Keller (Stargate: Atlantis). Given the type of mission, I'm going to say Jennifer Hailey.
Comments from author:
Yep, Rye is Riley Fin, Sam was his wife, Samantha Finn, Amy was Amy Madison and Jen was Jennifer Hailey, a character from Stargate SG-1.

And it's a cross with both the Panoptichron and the Time Variance Authority being variations of the ones in the ones noted in the marvel universe. ;-)
Review By [djhardim] • Date [12 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from OdinMage
Review:
you need to continue this!
Comments from author:
Not to worry - I will, once the August Fic-A-Thon is done. ;-)
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [12 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
Fun! This one I'd really like to see more of! The only one I have no clue about is Jen, I'm making an assumption that Rye and Sam are Major and Captain (I think, I never saw the episode) Finn, and Amy is Miss Madison?

Red
Comments from author:
Yep, you got the three of them correct, and Jen is Jennifer Hailey, a character from Stargate SG-1.

Glad you enjoyed the story, buddy.
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [12 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bumpkin
Review:
Bit rushed..and I am thinking that you might need a bit more background than I have to totally understand but an enjoyable read anyway. Harry and crew could still have been arguing about rescuing Sirius for the SGC/timewhatsits to overhear and then after Harry reads the letter he could have asked if Sirius was with them then ... that would have made his easy acceptance and his calm demeanor more believable. But that is only my personal opinion and by no means a criticism.

thanks for sharing and keep penning,
Marns
~pN
Comments from author:
It's not so much rushed as it's the introductory chapter to a story. I'll be following up on this once I have more time.

Thanks for reviewing and letting me know what you thought the strong and/or weak points of the story were.

More coming on other shorts as the month progresses and my muse dictates.
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [12 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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