Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from nerfherder
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Love the story with all the tie ins. Looking forward to more when the muse comes off strike.
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from trongod
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Saw a recommendation for this, and a lament that it hasn't been added to in so long, so I had to see what the story was...
This is /excellent/; even not being up on Bleach I can follow easily and the characters are well written. Now all we have to do is coerce you and the Muses to returning to this, and millions upon millions will be happy!!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from SnowyMountain
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A very interesting Halloween story. I do like the interaction between Xander and Faith, slowly turning them from associates into a very believable friendship (and I suspect something more).
Gin is a very interesting and underused character for Xander to crossover with, I applaud your creativity in choosing him. Usually, most authors favor the main characters so it's nice to see someone not do that.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Review By [SnowyMountain] • Date [2 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from tchizek
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Now this is a very cool fic. I like Xander and his powers, I am not familiar with the cross but I may have to look it up. I like the developing relationship between Xander and Faith a lot. I like the interaction between Snyder and Xander, it is interesting to see Snyder as something other than a pure troll.
What would be really great is if you could continue this!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from eriktheviking
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A great fun developing relationship.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from sjyu
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This is a very interesting story. I'm not familiar with the fandom, I'll check it out too. Looking forward to your next installment.
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from JonnyNapalm
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Okay... I love this story. Not the standard Bleach affair, and I love the choice of Gin as the character that bonded with Xander. You've got a really solid feel for the voice of Faith as well. Hope to see some more of this up on Twisting the Hellmouth.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from IrFane
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Just started reading this, and found it quite interesting. Curious as to why he doesn't just kill the mayor from a mile or so away, and why he trains in his real body (when Gin should have the skills to exit it) but meh.
Review By [IrFane] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from Orchamus
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Well, the only problem I have with it is the lack of Gin's accent being noticeable. He's got much of his personality, a great deal of power that he's worked hard for, and someone to protect just like Gin. Hell, he's even getting an in with the Big Bad just like Gin, so 2 thumbs up, all the way. If you're still looking for a beta, let me know in a reply back. I really hope to see more soon, this is far too good to let sit.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from Loatroll
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Good stuff. Looking forward to more. Thanks for the read.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from Acheloo
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Amazing story so far!! You are doing great!! Can't wait for your next update!!
Review By [Acheloo] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from GravyBaby
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FRICKIN-A!! YEEEERRRRSSSSS!!! Can't wait for the next update!!
Review By [GravyBaby] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from Ironbear
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I love this story. Good job.
I'd love to be able to volunteer to beta for you, but unfortunately, I'm just not online consistently enough right now to have the option. And not familiar enough with the x-over source material. ;( Good luck on finding someone.
Review By [Ironbear] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5 - Training and determination" from Selias
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Just found this fic, and I have to say that this is freaking fantastic. I can't wait to read more!
Review By [Selias] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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