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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Yshury
Review:
Xander started WW1 by accident?
haven´t heard that one before. nice
Review By [Yshury] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Presents" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Okay, great story so far.
I like the concept of adding Lycans to the Buffyverse this way and Xander is a great first Lycan.
I really like that he didn't end up with the memories but did end up with the powers, that leaves Xander as Xander w/o any leftover from the book/character. It makes the Lycans fit better into this 'verse.

Now if you would just add to it [grin]...
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Presents" from Raider
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quite entertaining.
Review By [Raider] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Presents" from Oxnate
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I like the premise, but I get a headache trying to read it. Very rough. Cleaned up, it's a solid 7. Maybe 8, it's hard to tell right now. But I know how hard it is to write so much in such a short amount of time. Now you just have to proofread better or find some one to do it for you.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Presents" from VillageOrchid
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Even if Xander didn't know a lot about computers, he would have remembered to invest in IBM... maybe even Xerox and Apple. So I can see him having a prototype. Giving/sharing Buffy his gift of "seeing" was an amazing choice. I thought he was just going to give them bathing suits or something. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 – Party time" from VillageOrchid
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Well, I guess it is good that Wilkins used offensive spells rather than power or magic-stripping spells. Other than really pissing off the powers-that-have-no-corporality, the future is now unwritten. Some of the villains from the Angel series such as WolfRamHart and the Order of the Black Thorne and the medium sized deamons who had a deal with Wilkins to leave the Hellmouth alone might show up, though. So there will still be foes who either want to control the hellmouth or the players on it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Elizabeth" from VillageOrchid
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Good job at dealing with long life... if she has been with him for 400 years that's enough time to have already almost forgotten everything living 1200 years. To show what he does remember is interesting. Like he remembered the highlander tv series and narrated back to himself on a regular basis what he wanted to remember and not forget.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 – What are you?" from VillageOrchid
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Good narrative and story structure twist. You probably need to read your stories another time before you post... because each chapter so far has had at least one "correctly spelled" incorrectly used word.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Coming Home" from VillageOrchid
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Is there a prequel story or are you slowly revealing. Slow reveal seems to be working...

I am taking the day of okay -- off? day off?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Presents" from msdarque
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Lovely chapter, I liked reading it.
Indeed it's good that the girls are starting to warm up to Xander.
Maybe with those amazing cuffs, Buffy will see truth more and doubt him less.
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Presents" from slmncpm
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it is a little rough around the edges, but i like the main story. *smiles* thanks for it.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 – Party time" from msdarque
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Fun, but also quite surprising chapter... really didn't see it coming- I mean, is the mayor now truly dead?
Loved it, congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 – Party time" from TheDon
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it would have been awesome if xander said something like "you can either get down or lay down, the choice is yours" to mayor wilkins or even any other wannabe big bad. i just love that line.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 – Party time" from DarthPayne
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Well now, ain't this a mess.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 – Party time" from moringstar
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hi ok story, but could do with a little more meat on the bones you give us a good over view but no real depth wich is would mkae this story good or mabe even great. keep going there a good base to work with keep going.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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