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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Balder
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I have to agree that the women were being evil. Or at least with the exception of the one who was willing to agree but was outvoted. Overall though I really enjoyed the series.
Review By [Balder] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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That was evil. He should go for a light sunburn I think.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
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THEY MUST PAY.

And it must be funny.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
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This story begs for one more chapter. What would happen if Joyce and Giles found out what the girls did? Forget about the prom.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jimk
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Aww, man you should have had Xander somehow trick them such as the light be so bright he could see through the hood or burn small pinholes or something. That was too good an opportunity to pass up!
Review By [jimk] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
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As another reviewer has noted, Xander should have left this bunch of arrogant, self-righteous and self-entitled harpies in the dust months ago, but only after making sure that he uses his haphazard abilities to ensure that these greedy bitches receive a major case of second degree burn over the entirety of their bodies - especially those areas which don't normally receive any tanning light. Essentially kidnapping him and holding him hostage, while threatening him with future vengeance unless he does as they wish is criminal, no matter now humorously you may try to portray it.

While some of the stories have been amusing, you have pretty much portrayed the rest of the Scoobies as shallow and interested in only what Xander can do for them, as opposed to actually being his friends and incorporating his abilities into their strategies.

If your intention is to portray them that way, then you're being quite successful. If you intended to show them as Xander's friends, then you need to work at it a little more.
Comments from author:
It's never been intended to be that serious, just part of the daily weirdness of living in Sunnydale for Xander. Keep in mind, that while the stories in this series came out during the last two weeks, in the timeline of the show, it's been over eighteen months for the guy having that totally random Chaos magic in him since Halloween. He has no control over who he might become, his powers' effectiveness then, or when, or how long it'll last. There have been times when it's been useful, but not all that many, and he can't ever depend on it. So making the Scooby Gang treat Xander as their secret weapon is like the group playing the lottery every week in the hopes of winning enough money to bribe every demon in town.

As for the girls, yeah, they can and will take him for granted. Xander's done this, too, regarding them. They're teenagers, after all, and they'll act like it.

Thanks for your thoughts. Next up -- Graduation!
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CageFire
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Oh those girls are cruel. At least buffy is.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from superfan
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I'm sorry, but at this point I can't help but wander if what controls the chaos magic is his subcutaneous. He seems to only get a joke on him with the magic and life in general, this smells of low self confidence that sabotages his life.

Because if he had a shred of self respect he would have cut all ties to Buffy and possibly the rest by now. I mean, over the course of this series her treatment of him just gets steadily worse. A good example is the thing with the spikes, she had the intention to basically torture him over a shoe, for something she knew he had no control over. She's supposed to be his friend.

That said, Good job this is funny if a bit heavy on the poor Xander Jokes.
Review By [superfan] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Pup
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Oh Xander you poor poor bastard. Yet your still a smarter man than me, I'd have burned through everything and ogled until I couldnt ogle any more.

Completely out of left feild, LOVE this installment.
Review By [Pup] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Klimmatt
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This one was hilarious, though I can't help but feel such sorrow for Xander. I mean, getting the sun powers at a time when you can't go put a dent in the vamp population is bad, but to be forced through THAT is just cruel.
Review By [Klimmatt] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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