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Review of chapter "August 14, 2011 – Chaos vs. Order" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
Loved it! But then again, it was Horatio, so it was pretty much guaranteed that I would...but you knew that.
Comments from author:
I could have made him die... Calm down! I was just teasing you. You know I'd never do that to him...probably.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "August 14, 2011 – Chaos vs. Order" from RandomSelection
Review:
Hey,

you hopefully know that I love and enjoy your stories a lot, so please don't take this the wrong way - maybe it's petty, but the way many people use the term POV ('point of view') the wrong way really bugs me (maybe it's because I graduated in German Literature).

'Ethan's POV' means that the narrator literally describes the fictional world of his/her story as seen through the eyes of a the character Ethan - so a sentence like "In retrospect, Ethan thought ..." would not be Ethan's POV, since Ethan would (usually) not be referring to himself in the 3. person. It had to be a 1. person narrative: "I thought/wondered ..." (I in this case being Ethan).

I hope you don't mind the comment,

yours, RandomSelection
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know the technical use of POV, but I wanted people to understand the different breaks and that was the first way to differentiate them that I thought of.
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "August 14, 2011 – Chaos vs. Order" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
A fic that definitely begs for a sequel...more please
Comments from author:
I suppose I probably did write it that way. When this month is all over, we'll see which of the stories Musie will come back to later.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "August 14, 2011 – Chaos vs. Order" from clarityfades
Review:
Ooh! This one is just begging for a sequel! I like it a lot, especially the line about "Ripper". And I love Horatio, so bonus. I so miss that side of Giles! :)
Comments from author:
Well, to be honest, since this would be happening in season 6 of BtVS (based on the airdates), Giles would be in England and both Buffy and I wouldn't be happy with him at the moment. I could change the season, I suppose.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "August 14, 2011 – Chaos vs. Order" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
A fitting end for Ethan Rayne and Horatio Caine is going to have kittens when he finds out about vampires, Slayers and the rest of the kaboodle.

One itty bitty nit to pick: "the doctors would need samples to test for an anecdote" I believe you meant to type antidote (something to neutralize or cure, particularly in the case of poison), an anecdote is a short story relating an incident.
Comments from author:
I could almost see Horatio flying out to Sunnydale...or maybe calling Grissom in Vegas to go out there? Thanks for the catch; that's the danger of writing after so many hours of driving and being too tired to properly proofread before the deadline to post.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "August 14, 2011 – Chaos vs. Order" from Harry
Review:
Horatio had no choice in shooting to kill. When you introduce a compound that acts like a drug, and is causing problems in the Lab, its up to the police to find a way to take them dawn.
And with what Ethan was doing, there was no option.

As for the next story, WW and Faith should be FASCINATING!
Comments from author:
I thought the shoot was reasonable, as long as he wasn't trying to kill, but I'm not a cop, so what do I know?

Need to think of the scenario for the next story.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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