Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dogbertcarroll
Review By [dogbertcarroll
] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Xander couldn't control the shift to Trippy. In point of fact, Xander was Trippy the whole time from the time it started.
That means that Willy was racked up and threatened by all three of Xander's babalicious forms in a (naturally) concerted ambush.
Review By [CrystalBlaze
] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hpssslashfan
very interesting, but a few plot holes.
1 why was he hit w/ chaos magic.
2 why did he become 3 girls
3 why did it last a Month.
4 why could he remember who he was.
5 why could he control the change
6 why did it wear off
sorry there are more but that was just off the top of my head, still it is an interesting premise.
oh... answer. masturbation if you have Xander having only 1 mind in all three bodies so that they would be like him controlling different limbs all at the same time or incest if he gets 3 sets of memories one from each body during the transformation.
Comments from author:
For all your questions:
1. Phases of the moon?
2. A butterfly in Brazil flapped its wings once and set off the whole thing?
3. A fanfiction author wanted to have some fun with probably the most useless ability in comicdom? (Unless you're on stakeout and need to look in three different directions at once while praying the bad guys won't pick the fourth way to attack. Or want to always be able to drive in the freeway carpool lane.)
Review By [hpssslashfan
] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Klimmatt
That is an intriguing question, I'd say masturbation.
Great instalment, can't wait for tomorrow's.
Why'd this one last half the summer though? And why could he control the shift from Xander to Triplicate Girl?
Review By [Klimmatt
] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated