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Xander and the former Dark Lady of the Sith

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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from aeraveil
Review:
You need to continue this story, it's well written and a believable cross so far.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [24 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Nice to see Xander has such consistent luck with the Ladies...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Sanabalis
Review:
Oh, it just gets better and better. I hope you didn't quit on this story.
Review By [Sanabalis] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Cdog
Review:
Nice chapter. It was interesting to see that he still has trouble with the ladies.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Bobboky
Review:
Very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Raider
Review:
insane kill mad droid....ya thats a good way of describing HK.

another awesome chapter man.
Comments from author:
tx for the review and that good description of HK I have to credit to Razial :) but I had to agree......
Review By [Raider] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Good story. Nice to see Xander in a mentoring story (with a cute strong women who can kick his ass). Please continue.
Comments from author:
do you really thing Xander can enjoy himself without the risk of getting his ass kicked? Especially if he call Revan cute:)

tx for the review
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DarthPayne
Review:
Huh, i'd actually forgotten about this one...
Comments from author:
no surprise considering my updates come very slowly. Nice you found your way back.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from djhardim
Review:
Looks good. The next thing for Revan to do is to check Xander's Midi-chlorian level. That could affect how much she can train him.

Would Revan be considered an Ancient?
Comments from author:
was that Midi nonsense ever mention somewhere else than in the crap ep 1 - 3? Sorry but you won't see that here and by now she may be ancient but she isn't of that bunch of beings called the Ancients.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from IrFane
Review:
Entertaining! A stargate/star wars/buffy mix... but believable. The engine trouble specifics really helped sell that, with Revan having been known to explore and tinker (thus star maps and HK). I'm curious as to how her story made fiction in this setting, though with precogs, seers, and time-manipulators native to a buffy setting, there are many ways... so the why is more interesting.

I assume the star wars franchise started the same way in this universe?
Comments from author:
yes it started the same way with GL bringing us to Tatooine for the first time. To the why and how we come later, you can bet your salary that Revan will want some answers in that regard as well.
Review By [IrFane] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DrDamage
Review:
This is really good. I hope we'll be seeing more soon
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Cool, Xander has weird force powers...

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
yeah making him a standard jedi sounded a bit boring to myself :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Oh, this story is VERY good!!! I really like the pairing up of Xander and Revan!
Comments from author:
ahh reviews like that are balsam to the soul...tx
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Oh, Hawkian! Thank you very much for this most informative update!! I'm eager to see where this story leads Xander!
Comments from author:
thanks for the review and then I have some good and some bad news.

Good news: The next ch is already written.
Bad News: It's still at my beta Inachis and because she is quite busy with RL that always takes a while.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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