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Hermione and the Cursed Sword

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
strange start, but interesting enough that I will check out ch 2
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dinner Musings" from Eureka
Review:
Do hope the couple aren't "busy". LOL
Review By [Eureka] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
Review:
Far too much telling; stories are about showing. It's got an expository dump equivalent to the one I take every morning when I stumble out of bed and it's not even properly formatted to boot. When people talk, it's called dialogue. There are quotation marks around it. You seem to have realized this in some places, and yet in others... not so much. I suggest getting a beta. Or, if there is one already - I didn't look and don't really feel like going back to check - I suggest you get a new one. Or another.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dinner Musings" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Since JK decided that Hermione become a housewife and mother first, before having a career, you've done an excellent job of dramatizing the dilemma of the woman who can be more.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far, I felt that the Epilogue gave her the short shrift.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying your style, even if I have no idea why Buffy ended up with Graham Miller!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Cool story. And I love almost any fic that has Buffy with Graham (assuming it's not a horribly angsty fic). This isn't too angsty for me...yet.
Comments from author:
No not too much angst- though a bit of exposition (still not sure were I'm going with this.)
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
Review:
Hmm... interesting. I look forward to seeing what you will do with the next chapter.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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