Wicked story!

pinkhairedharry is writing a pretty darn good story here!! I'm eager to read more of it!!

still working on the next chapter but it's almost done.

wonderful

thank you

Dealing with intelligent, hard-headed people really works when you can produce proof.

:)

A well written 'professional' analysis of the group by an outsider.

I cant claim all the credit. My beta really helped with the analysis portion

interesting chapter...
eagerly awaiting for the next one ^_^

thanks

This was a very good update. I look forward to seeing more. Love the way Garcia a techno pagan. Wonder if the council will try to steal her and kevin.
Fire

they wouldn't try to steal them but they will probably try to get them as emergency help.

Really enjoying this story, and was delighted to see a notice of a new chapter in my inbox. ;-)

Like the BAU personnel's evaluations of the Scoobies, and the way the Scoobies very reluctantly admitted that they came to the BAU as a last resort, when they couldn't figure out the perps on their own. ;-)

I just re-read the entire story again, and have to laugh at the humanizing touches you've added - Kevin's slapping Xander and Willow in the head and scolding them for making him worry about them made him much more realistic as an annoyed relative; Garcia being a techno-pagan (like Jenny!) and Morgan being the slightest bit annoyed that he wasn't aware of that aspect of her life; Spenser's having met Lorne and gotten advice from him - all of these are the type of thing that really adds to the believability and suspension of disbelief of the story.

Great work, and I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter when the BAU finally starts doing what they do best - figure out who the unsub(s) is/are, and find him/her/them. ;-)

thank you

Informative and introspective chapter.
Liked it, especially the Scoobies' profiles. :)
Congrats!

thanks. i really have to thank my beta for help with the profiles

Are you ready for the truth that is out there? Some people more than others apparently. Garcia the Technopagan. Interesting. I look forward to the continuation

Thanks

WOW so many in the know but silent about it. I can believe that about Garcia. LOL

well no one wants to be seen as crazy. Garcia does amasing things with her computers. she admits to being a computer wizard. so i totally see her as a techno pagan. it really fits her. i couldn't help myself

Awesome fic, please update soon! *grins*

Xx

thanks XD

seeing as i just updated today it will probably be a few days

Great, surprising, slightly sad chapter.
Liked it, informative. Congrats!

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One wonders what insurance rates were like in Sunnydale. Maybe the Mayor owned an insurance company & kept the rates low to encourage more people to come in to replace the dead ones? i.e. like with Joyce moving in, the house was not expensive...
Hm. They should look into the Cleveland hell mouth for magic users.

Probably. thanks

Watchers in Training and Wiccas in Training both have the same abbreviation? That must be confusing. Maybe the Wicca's could be called Mages instead? WiT and MiT are different :)

The same abbreviation just until they finish training. i put my wicca in training through the watcher training as well so they can act as watchers because they are still short on regular Watchers