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Review of chapter "chapter 8" from Seagul
Review:
You haven't told us how JJ and Emily are handling demons being real yet. Though you gave the impression that Emily already knew. I hope you come back to this story soon.
Review By [Seagul] • Date [6 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from sprig
Review:
wow~ that's an interesting twist to things. can't wait to see more.
Review By [sprig] • Date [29 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from Vickzie
Review:
Wicked story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from BrownFinderth
Review:
pinkhairedharry is writing a pretty darn good story here!! I'm eager to read more of it!!
Comments from author:
still working on the next chapter but it's almost done.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from twlight
Review:
wonderful
Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [twlight] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from banner
Review:
Dealing with intelligent, hard-headed people really works when you can produce proof.
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [banner] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written 'professional' analysis of the group by an outsider.
Comments from author:
I cant claim all the credit. My beta really helped with the analysis portion
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting chapter...
eagerly awaiting for the next one ^_^
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from FireWolfe
Review:
This was a very good update. I look forward to seeing more. Love the way Garcia a techno pagan. Wonder if the council will try to steal her and kevin.
Fire
Comments from author:
they wouldn't try to steal them but they will probably try to get them as emergency help.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from Greywizard
Review:
Really enjoying this story, and was delighted to see a notice of a new chapter in my inbox. ;-)

Like the BAU personnel's evaluations of the Scoobies, and the way the Scoobies very reluctantly admitted that they came to the BAU as a last resort, when they couldn't figure out the perps on their own. ;-)

I just re-read the entire story again, and have to laugh at the humanizing touches you've added - Kevin's slapping Xander and Willow in the head and scolding them for making him worry about them made him much more realistic as an annoyed relative; Garcia being a techno-pagan (like Jenny!) and Morgan being the slightest bit annoyed that he wasn't aware of that aspect of her life; Spenser's having met Lorne and gotten advice from him - all of these are the type of thing that really adds to the believability and suspension of disbelief of the story.

Great work, and I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter when the BAU finally starts doing what they do best - figure out who the unsub(s) is/are, and find him/her/them. ;-)
Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from msdarque
Review:
Informative and introspective chapter.
Liked it, especially the Scoobies' profiles. :)
Congrats!
Comments from author:
thanks. i really have to thank my beta for help with the profiles
Review By [msdarque] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Are you ready for the truth that is out there? Some people more than others apparently. Garcia the Technopagan. Interesting. I look forward to the continuation
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Eureka
Review:
WOW so many in the know but silent about it. I can believe that about Garcia. LOL
Comments from author:
well no one wants to be seen as crazy. Garcia does amasing things with her computers. she admits to being a computer wizard. so i totally see her as a techno pagan. it really fits her. i couldn't help myself
Review By [Eureka] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from SarahLou
Review:
Awesome fic, please update soon! *grins*

Xx
Comments from author:
thanks XD

seeing as i just updated today it will probably be a few days
Review By [SarahLou] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from msdarque
Review:
Great, surprising, slightly sad chapter.
Liked it, informative. Congrats!
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [msdarque] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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