Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
ZaxxonReview:
Interesting...
Very little here, but could be a good foundation stone to build upon.
Although, not sure of the title, I guess that Xander would be the Bard, and Faith could be the Bladesmith, Bards in the Past, were jacks of all trade as well as story-tellers, which for some reason I can't see Faith telling a good story. But then, I can see both of them qualify to be Bladesmiths.
Do hope you continue this.
Review By [
Zaxxon] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
ZaxxonReview:
Kind of... short.
But could be very interesting.
I do wish you could continue this.
Review By [
Zaxxon] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
erikthevikingReview:
A great teaser of a scene setter.
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
jimkReview:
Cool idea. Nice start at least.
Review By [
jimk] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
GenukaReview:
interesting. I'm going to have to keep watch on this one.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have the story mostly done it's just a matter of editing. Don't think the schedule will be to regular though.
Review By [
Genuka] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
