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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from locard
Review:
This is one hell of a good story and can lead you so many places and I hope you take that trip.
Review By [locard] • Date [2 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
read it again and still a good story.

great job
Review By [bradsan] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from terrence
Review:
Love the crossover! I really love Buffy-In-Charge. I would enjoy seeing a follow up, maybe introducing Buffy and Co. to Atlantis?
Review By [terrence] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
Review:
Ok, that's chapter one! Where's the rest???
Comments from author:
well not the ORI- that was a pretty lame bunch

The next galaxy type big bads are much more up the Slayers alley.

you know

space vampires
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [23 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Treva
Review:
Need.to.continue.!! Very well written.

Treva Rea
Review By [Treva] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Please do continue this fascinating tale!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
Review:
More along this line, please!! To the stars!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [18 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I may've asked this before, but is there any chance you'll write a sequel to this someday? :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
I really liked reading this story. it was refreshing and relaxed reading. I don't care that other reviewers think that it was Buffy friendly. I totally agree with you. Everybody forgets that Buffy is not only The Slayer but she is also human and a teenager.

And Buffy didn't had a choice The Scoobies did and they acted worse than The Council. Always pushing her in directions they think were good for her because she isn't smart enough to choose her own path. They always though less off her because she acted like a dumb blond. They forget that her SAT score proves the opposite and she gets the scores with almost zero time of learning with all the slaying and training on daily base. I know I couldn't do that.

And don't forget our demon magnet Xander who begged for the live of Anya when she chooses to be a vengeance demon twice and killed more people than Angel and Spike. He blamed Buffy that she couldn't kill Angel, what about him. He couldn't let her kill Anya and even Willow when she became dark. he tried to rape Buffy when he was possessed and still blamed Spike while Spike blames himself from trying it and gets a soul for so it couldn't happen again. He never apologized for it and he did remember even if he say he didn't, the others did so why not him. And the other things that were his fold and cost human lives. He had more demon girlfriends than Buffy boyfriends. Hypocrite much.

And Willow when the things go though she uses spells to make live easier. Not thinking about the consequences how smart is that. When Tara gets killed she goes so dark she killed a human with a cruelty that it's un human. She doesn't even goes to jail for it while Faith did and was called phys-co for it. And Dawn did everything to make Buffy's live more difficult than it has to be and that is sad if you know that your sister is working her ass for you to keep a roof above your had so they can't take you away. They lived their for free and didn't do anything to help to pay the bills or make it easier for her. And Giles well he betrayed her trust three times and leaves her when she needed him most and got the nerve to say he can't trust her anymore, gosh how though full of him. They all wanted her to take the potential out fighting because it would be a good learning experience. Only with fighting somebody always gets hurt in their case it could be dieing to.

Thank god for her support from her two vampires who believed in her and took their time to look behind her mask and tried to support her when she needed it.

Good story, good writing, love it even the not bashing parts, really refreshing.

Only one thing you didn't explain or I missed it. What is happening to Buffy.

Edit: Thank you for taking the time to explain what happend to Buffy, I thought that already but wasn't sure. I read my review again and spotted some writing mistakes I made, sorry about that.
Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch. That was what I was trying to do.

It is mostly the Xander fanatics that hate on Buffy because she dared to not fall for their hero.

Sometimes I wish they would split this site into Xander fics and then everything else; about half the stories would go there.

Buffy is becoming Queen of the Slayers.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alynambered
Review:
I enjoyed this story, a lot!!

Yes, it is kinda fluffy and Buffy-friendly; but, also, not Scoobie bashing. So what, it's a nice little (Right!) story. No big deal. Get over it.

I personally would like more in any flavor the author chooses.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WARLOCKPOTTER
Review:
I loved your story i liked the way you portrayed everyone nice to see Buffy take charge.I hope you are planning on a sequel or a a series of stories about this .Great job thanks for posting.
Review By [WARLOCKPOTTER] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I love it! I like to think that this is how things SHOULD have gone (and DID go, in my mind, since I've never read the season 8 comics and have my doubts about anything said about Buffy's current whereabouts and activities in AtS season 5) after the end of "Chosen".

Any chance of a sequel some day?
Comments from author:
actually working on a side story involving potentials, Q and some PTB's that did not leave.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cryyhavoc
Review:
I agree with those who have stated that this is too much "Saint Buffy" material. I guess the Scoobies not wanting to die makes them a bunch of A-holes.

Also, why should the Scoobies trust Buffy, after all only her murdering rapist "yes man" has her back.

Finally, pointing out canon facts to an author is not getting on a soapbox. Buffy should be the only one apologizing for trying to force everyone into a deathtrap, and throwing a fit like an 8 year old child when things didn't go her way.

EDIT:

Rolls eyes.

Who fought for 7 years as a choice, and not some bulls**t destiny that she constantly whined about for 7 years?

Buffy did leave (or abandoned) her duty.

People die in war, usually led by superior competent officers with years of training in leadership and people skills, neither of which Buffy had. Not by some egomaniac dictator who sees everyone as canon fodder except her rapist woobie. In war, leaders like Buffy are shot in the back of the head by their own soldiers.

Clearly you are someone who can't take criticism.
Comments from author:
Rolls eyes.

Who got yanked out of heaven?

Who was always up front taken the brunt of everything?

Who had no choice as regards leaving?

It was war. People die in war. IF the scoobies could not figure that out then they were pretty stupid.

And in the end who came back and saved their tails?

Clearly you are someone who has never had to face death.

She faced it almost every night for 7 years.

EDIT

Who else had to kill the one that they loved to end the world? xander? Willow? Giles?
Yes she ran- after being kicked out of her home by her mother; wanted by the police; had to kill her love; all this before she was 18. You would be a crying whimpering wreck for the rest of your life.
Where would buffy have gotten this training- from who?
Choice is empowering- I guess you like slaves.
I have to laugh at your problem with a souless demon attempting a rape. What else do they do that offends you?
And you still somehow avoid mentioning not only getting pulled out of heaven; but having to deal with working in a
fastfood place for minimum wage while trying to keep the world from ending.
Buffy was the slayer- it was her job. Yes she whined about it- only a moron would just accept garbage like she had to.
You convienently cherry picked what bothered you - just like a defense lawyer defending someone they know is guilty.
Review By [cryyhavoc] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CindyB
Review:
Very cool. I always thought how cool that we now had a bunch of Slayers and along comes the Wraith. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
enjoyed the read, thank you. hope to see a sequel.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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