Review of chapter "Chapter One" from vidicon
I'd say go with the story. I'd like to see the explanation why DD is out of he book and getting on Kennedy's nerves.
Review By [vidicon
] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
I'm surprised to see Dumbledor popping up in America so maybe Kennedy is nuts :)
And that thing about a pair of eyes is just creepy. Who do the eyes belong to? Maybe it was just the First screwing with her.
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated