I normally don't read or like shorts but this was great. Would be alot of fun to see the punchline in a larger story.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you gave it a shot anyway. I have a bad track record with writing longer stories (in that I lose interest half was through) so I try to stick with writing shorts. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [kangel] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Somehow I think they'd screw themselves up more. Both Ritalin and coffee are stimulants.
If the coffee isn't calming her like most reports on adhd say it can do, then Ritalin will send her into orbit.
Comments from author:
But she doesn't have ADHD. She just has too much energy and she's hyper alert because her inner slayer senses danger. But I see your point. Thank you for reviewing.