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Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from Grovtech
Review:
And here I was wondering just how Carol had survived! What a great twist! I knew from the other stories that she was 'exceptional' in some way, but not that she was a lightning warrior. Whoa, good stuff!

Grover
Comments from author:
I really should do something about publicising the reading order, I admit. Glad you enjoyed carol as an Immortal/Lightning warrior.

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Review By [Grovtech] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from DieselDriver
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I thought Dalman Ross was Adam was the same. Not? It's been a long time since I watched any highlander.
Comments from author:
No Dallman Ross was killed by Mac who was duped by the immortal child, Kenny.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fly by me" from DieselDriver
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Well, DAMN! I guess I'll have to go try and watch SG1. That was cool!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope that the series is as exciting as the story.

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Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from SilverWave
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Great story and it fills in some of the blanks :-).

Cheers!
Comments from author:
Good to hear. These sidestories are there to prevent LS from getting even more unwieldy. Hope that works.

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Review By [SilverWave] • Date [30 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from SpacedCadet
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Review:

Now all she had to do was get the bird of the ground and do what damage she could.

**off** the ground ?

Comments from author:

I have no idea why that is still in there. In my files (the web page I uploaded and the word one) it has been corrected. Sometimes the site seems reluctant to accept changes like that if I reupload the entire chapter. I do still have to put that one in correct format though. Maybe that will help.

Thanks for reviewing



I have noticed that showing "of" instead of "off" is a recurring mistake especially in the earlier chapters of Lonely Souls.
Comments from author:
Yeah, but my beta's are very good at catching them, most of the time. Add my own language's set of off/of's and things get really dicey. I've accepted I just have a blind eye to them. Ah well...
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [15 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fly by me" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Now all she had to do was get the bird of the ground and do what damage she could.

**off** the ground ?
Comments from author:
I have no idea why that is still in there. In my files (the web page I uploaded and the word one) it has been corrected. Sometimes the site seems reluctant to accept changes like that if I reupload the entire chapter. I do still have to put that one in correct format though. Maybe that will help.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from (Past Donor)James
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You are a tease!!!!!!!

James
Comments from author:
Yes. I admit it freely. ;-)

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Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fly by me" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Love the way you keep reclaiming characters.

Nice way to come home.

Can't wait to see how Carol reacts to Teal'c.

James
Comments from author:
Thank you, i rather enjoy doing it. Hopefully things will start looking up for Carol soon.

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Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Now, how did Carol become an Immortal? Did I miss reading that somewhere? Again, very good writing and another most fine backstory!
Comments from author:
Immortals are born somehow. When she was killed by Apophis, she then revived, for the first time, in the charnel pit. And then things began to get strange...

Thanks glad you're enjoying it and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from RebeccaAshling
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I haven't watched much "Stargate: SG-1" so I'm unfamiliar with the cited episode. However, promising characters do have a tendency to be killed off pretty damn quickly so it's good that you rectified this. Adam Pierson is Methos, isn't he? Which is how Carol awoke in the charnel pit. The Quickening, of course.

Marigold are horrible and it's really unsettling to see their isolate and capture tactics at work. Hopefully, Marigold will get its comeuppance at some point. Sooner, rather than later as the organisation is *vile*
Comments from author:
It's the pilot. The first character to speak, and she dies. I couldn;t let that happen, so I created this...

Adam Pierson is indeed Methos. You'll meet him, or see him in the background, in other stories.

Marigold are horrible and unsettling to me and I created them. Ugh.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from Bushranger
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I'm liking this. Hope to see quite a bit more!

@v How about all three?;)
Comments from author:
Thank you. Did you mean of Highlander/Star Gate, Carol, or the series?

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Review By [Bushranger] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Thanks for not leaving Carol on the dustheap -- that was such a waste in canon! I look forward to seeing what comes next in this series.
Comments from author:
My pleasure. Well, this story line intersects LS pretty soon, so we get that, then we may or may not get some SGC action.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from grd
Review:
This is another very interesting and excellent offshoot. Hope Hammond, Pierson, and Jack can really trump Samuel's constant abuse on Carol. Payback.
Comments from author:
Thank you, some things to be told before this story line can join the mian one. Yes, I always thought Samuels got off a little too lightly in the series...

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [grd] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from purrfus
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This really appealed to me on many levels, not the least of which was rescuing the young blond female airman from obscurity. I have a great deal of fondness for most of the Stargate characters and for Adam Pierson. I thought the focus on Carol really worked well establishing the character as a person because Stargate really didn't do much of anything with her. That focus was something that surprised me and appealed when I read this.

I've tried a few times to read Lonely Souls, but have found the large numbers of characters used difficult. Maybe if I am able to read other parts of the series with enthusiasm, like this one, I'll eventually be able to overcome the problem.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Her only part in the series was to be killed, and that I found a waste. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've put up a list of characters (partial only I'm afraid) on the waifs and starys forum, you might want to consult that. The genealogies there might be helpful too.

I hope you will manage to get into LS, I admit it's a bit of a monster.;-) Please let me know what you think of the shorter ones, or my other series.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To dance with Death" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written sense of intrigue as well as a realistic look into Col. Jack O'Neill.
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Jack is quite fun to write.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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