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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Dragan
Review:
LOL I can just imagine Xander counter-offering a Firebolt to Willow's and Tara's amazement and indignation of a stereotype. :)
Comments from author:
Yeah, that would definitely honk Willow's anti-witch-stereotype button, big time!!!!

And the look on her face when he explained to her how some of the stereotypes were normal parts of Wizarding life would be priceless! ;-)
Review By [Dragan] • Date [9 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from twlight
Review:
Well this is a wonderful wonderful wonderful way of dealing with Buffy's finical problems if he is married to Buffy. He can also bring them all to England as a family trip. I do hope that Willow gets some help with her magic problem soon. Again I love this wonderful story and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment as soon as the muse to this story allows it.
Comments from author:
I'm trying to get the next chapter of this one done, so I can show what some of the changes in everyone's lives are, but my muse isn't cooperating at the moment. ;-(
Review By [twlight] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Genuka
Review:
Aw, The puppy dog eyes of doom! *cackle* I wonder if they'll even be able to disolve it, assuming they decide too...
Comments from author:
It really depends on what everyone thought they were agreeing to, doesn't it? ;-)
Review By [Genuka] • Date [12 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from possom
Review:
I was enjoying this fic up to chapter 4, then became leery that it would become a slash fic. Then I read this review:

(Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from deamon
Review:
so this isnt going to be slash is it? And are they goin to all be getting a divorce or whatever?
Comments from author:
Nope, no slash.

And the marriage situation is going to be discussed over the course of the next few chapters, as more information becomes available.)



And my fears were put to rest.
Comments from author:
Glad that you're enjoying the fic.

I think you'll like what Fate's got planned for the gang. ;-)
Review By [possom] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from deamon
Review:
so this isnt going to be slash is it? And are they goin to all be getting a divorce or whatever?
Comments from author:
Nope, no slash.

And the marriage situation is going to be discussed over the course of the next few chapters, as more information becomes available.
Review By [deamon] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ChaosLady
Review:
How evil is Dawn? ;> Excellent update!
Comments from author:
How evil is she? She's your typical adolescent girl.

Which means Satan is fearing for his throne. ;-)
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Oakheart
Review:
Who needs Quantum Entanglement when you can have Magic in the mix! Magic has its own
internal logic, its own sense of proportion, and apparently, its own sense of humor!

Very fun; enjoying immensely. Looking forward to any further additions.

SD
Comments from author:
Logic? We don't need no stinking logic! ;-)

Glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from wonderbee
Review:
Why do I imagine a lot more grey hairs in the future for all the older folk there, as I could imagine Dawn being heck on wheels before all is over and done with lol.
Comments from author:
After having to deal with Buffy's canon driving experience, Dawn's driving record can only improve, in comparison. ;-)
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from superfan
Review:
Ohh, Dawn is utterly wonderful:)
Comments from author:
I'm just portraying her as your typical adolescent female. ;-)
Review By [superfan] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter! Now I wonder if Spike is going to try to go all "Big Bad" on them? and are Giles and Willow cheating on their spouses? Will Dawn get her birthday and holiday presents? You are turning this into an episode of Jerry Springer .

Tom.
Comments from author:
I'm actually trying to develop Spike's character in this, so I'm hoping you'll be surprised when you see what is coming.

And this isn't anything like Jerry Springer, since there aren't any screaming rednecks, bottle-throwing drunks or actual fistfights among the interviewees.

At least, not yet, there aren't. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from lordamnesia
Review:
I love that you decided to add onto this story, it was a great oneshot, and makes an even better continuation, because even though your writing was great when you made it, it seems to have smoothed out quite a bit! Keep up the excellent work!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I really appreciate the good words. Thanks for reviewing. ;-)
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Netchka
Review:
Great a new chapter. Cool story. Just reread again. Can't wait for the next chapters to be posted. Hope they come soon. :-) :-)
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story, and I appreciate your reviewing and telling me that. ;-)

More will appear at my muse's whim. ;-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)Starfox
Review:
Great Story! And Dawn's reaction just fits her to a "t". Also, Anya and Giles make a very nice couple. I am looking forward to the scoobies meeting the wizard gang.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Dawn's a teenager, so her basic reaction is going to be, "What do *I* get out of this?", of course. ;-) (I have five sisters, so I'm going by observational experience, here. ;-) )

And the Scoobies' interactions with the Wizarding World are going to be - interesting. To say the least. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
-Explosives couldn't have created a bigger mess just now.

Sirius really should have taken that as a challenge. Hell, if I was there I would have
taken it as a challenge!

Hmmm. Xander divorces Giles and marries Tara, all four are happy. Or Anya marries Giles and Tara marries Willow and the entire wizarding world just shrugs and says black always was a wild one.
Comments from author:
That's one way to look at it. But then, Xander also realized that *he'd* be the one who probably end up stuck having to clean up, afterwards.

And the marriage 'contract' situation will be one of the subjects to be discussed in the next couple chapters.

One thing to keep in mind is that the Scoobies don't do 'normal' very well. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [3 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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