Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Oh poor Dawn, you're in such a mess!! I love how you showed how conflicted she was by seeing him again - obviously scared, and terrified of why he was there, but in the end still giving into him and the lust she feels with him. *shakes head* She is so screwed! No pun intended, I swear! Heehee!
I also love that the Joker followed Dawn to California. He obviously can't let her go - which isn't good news for Dawnie that's for sure...
Thanks for writing - I really enjoyed this sequel!!
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwistedSlinky
None can resist the clown...well, other than Kimmi. LOL. She's gonna kill me for that one... Anyhow, great story. I'm particularly fond of a good table scene *coughcough*. Well done.
Review By [TwistedSlinky
] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]