Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
LeaFairyReview:
Oh poor Dawn, you're in such a mess!! I love how you showed how conflicted she was by seeing him again - obviously scared, and terrified of why he was there, but in the end still giving into him and the lust she feels with him. *shakes head* She is so screwed! No pun intended, I swear! Heehee!
I also love that the Joker followed Dawn to California. He obviously can't let her go - which isn't good news for Dawnie that's for sure...
Thanks for writing - I really enjoyed this sequel!!
Review By [
LeaFairy] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
TwistedSlinkyReview:
None can resist the clown...well, other than Kimmi. LOL. She's gonna kill me for that one... Anyhow, great story. I'm particularly fond of a good table scene *coughcough*. Well done.
Review By [
TwistedSlinky] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]