This is one of the funniest stories that I have read on this site and definitely the funniest iteration between BTVS and the SGC universes. I hope that you find the time and the inspiration to carry on with this story.
Review By [lastjuan] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I guess you are right about the word frack, as Buffy might adapt her cursing to her surrounding of the SGC.
It's been real fun to read. From your comments I seem to understand you want to leave it with Buffy uncaught, and we've reached the end for now? I like the idea, but the story does not say it is complete.
Also, Buffy kind of left a big trail by using her (cell)phone; since they are within a mountain the only way to have reception is if the SGC has their own cell tower/ So all Carter has to do is check the logs for who was using an un-certified device that that time and trace it back.
There was one mistake: "Okay, so maybe she was having too much fun [at] this. " (missing ' at') (just a FYI, as i make more mistakes in one little review)
The after action report Jack writes will probably not reflect actual events 100%. Hm, after all that activity, I'll bet Buffy left behind some fingerprints in some places. AND... hers are on file --when she briefly joined the Initiative and got a security card etc in s4, I bet those went into a file somewhere. (Not sure if they'd be in a public/accessible to SGC file, though). But they can probably trace her movements to local hotel, to an air flight, etc, if they try hard enough. Breaching security like that is serious enough, but invisible on top of that? Got to be an alien. Foothold situation! Poor Giles.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 May 12] • Not Rated
How dare Giles have such low expectations! I guess he does know Buffy very well after all :) I hope he assigns her a position liaising with a certain Governmental deep space radar team - that would take some fast talking on her part!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [24 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]