Hmm, interesting addition. I now really look forward to the main part two. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Hmm, interesting addition. I now really look forward to the main part two. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Pylean vacation seemed the best but the potion was poetic. Good to see Ripper out.

I do so hope very much that the author continues this story!!! I delight in reading it!

This 'verse is no where no near finished and as long as i find time I will write.

good story.
Only one thing faith is born in 14 december 1980 and called in may 1998 at the age off seventeen and not fourteen. She is one year older than Buffy who is born in January or February 1981 and yes you got that right called at fifteen.
There are a lot of people thinking Faith is younger or the same age as Buffy but she is one year older.
Buffy is the oldest Slayer or the longest-lived Slayer.

Oh I almost forget, could you please write a chapter where Eli suffers. Would really like that one. You now why. I'm a little evil. Parents should protect and love their childeren no matter what. What he did is cruel.

Once I'm free at xmas i will try and write an Eli chapter as the idea appeals to me.

I love the truly appropriate revenge, but with a slayer's healing kicking in, when the drug wear's off, it won't last long enough to suit. Great update.

Glad you liked the update. The potion lasts until she has recovered mentally, not physically.

please add chapter three which shows his bodyguards and assistants wondering why Eli is screaming and having nightmares; just before he is locked up in the local peculiar parlor.

MMmmm. I like the idea, if i have time i will try and write that up.

ha very nice....i like willow's and buffy's idea too ;)

It would work well i think. Too bad that his disappearance would cause too many questions.
Glad you liked the chapter.
:)

OMG.... that was simply brilliant....
fabulous ideas....
it would be interesting to see Eli`s reaction to Ziva`s ordeal....
Giles was fantastic ^_^

Glad you liked it! If i have time a thiird chapter may be added.

A very well written, gentle and understated, clash of two strong characters.

Thank you! It was more character driven than usual so i'm glad i found teh right balance.
Glad you liked it!

Ohhhhh that was WICKED!! and I love me some wicked... Great chapter!!

Tis fun is it not? I'm gad that you liked the chapter.

*Begins laughing like the Joker with a REALLY good line of entertainment (destructive lethal chaos) lined up* Me likes!

Chaos is fun! Glad you liked the chapter! :)

A fitting punishment (though I'd still vote for Pylea...)

Great story - keep up the good work.

Pylea would have been great, but if he disappeared there would have still been difficult questions.

Yup, that was a good punishment. If Eli hadn't been the director of the Mossaud, it would be a different story, though.

Yep, if he wasn't director it would be a whole different story. Glad you liked the story.

I so hate Eli David sigh good job maybe he will learn LOL

Glad you liked the chapter. Somehow, i doubt that Eli will learn.