Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FaithWinchester
The boys are hers... yes, I like that, are you going to write the boys being hers? Pretty please? LOL Well written and good premise, I like this series so far!
Review By [FaithWinchester
] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
interesting story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena
] • Date [31 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
I can understand Dawn wanting something of her own and some space from her sister, but based on her past choices of people to trust I don't know if that is a good idea :( But then again is it kidnapping if she goes along willingly? I don't know if Dean will react well when the lies come about but maybe Sam will understand.
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kateruth
This is a fab story. Characterization are completely real and the dynamic between the brothers and Dawn and Dawn and Buffy are ace. I love that it teeters from the norm to the supernatural in the girls conversation and that Dawn is still a little guarded. Very cute.
Review By [kateruth
] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Oh, I LOVED this so much!!! Dawn secretly hunting with Dean and Sam, lying to Buffy about what she's doing and where, and to the brothers about who her and her family really are - all of it is seriously awesome! I also adored Sam's POV in this - his 'voice' was spot on and I loved Dawn's thought of wanting a translator for the "looks" between the brothers.
Anyhoo, thanks for the really brilliant story - I enjoyed reading it!!
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PatriciaLouise
Total genius. And the lies are totally in character for Dawn I think. And the manip was fun. I espeicially loved that clever little stamp in the upper right corner. I can't wait for more in this series! Love it!
Review By [PatriciaLouise
] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from clockworkorange
If Dean and Sam (plus Dawn) run across the Criminal Minds team that would be pretty amusing.
Review By [clockworkorange
] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Not Rated