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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
Awesomeness!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
You have an enormous cast of characters so I can see why you would want to rush through each meeting. I can't help but feel a little disappointed though that all of them will be meeting/ falling in love/ knowing everything about each other within a few lines or paragraphs at most. It also doesn't give you much time to reflect the essence of each show, for example D'Hoffryn seems like a good guy here when he most definitely was not in the series. A reasonable demon perhaps but still evil. He was the one who killed Hallie just to teach Anya a lesson! Immortality is also not usually portrayed as a good thing in BTVS. The whole point of Angel's sanshu was that he would be able to give up his immortality to live a normal life. However these are your stories and you can change anything you like. I just hope you take a bit longer to tell some of the later stories.
Spelling and grammar was good, but the story did read a bit like a plot summary at the start.
Comments from author:
I agree with you that I am rushing and with this series I need to get them all together so that I can get on to the longer stories. As for Angel there is an explanation as to why he is now immortal, it is in a future story. D'Hoffryn is not actually a good demon, he is one who has made a treaty with the Council. As is shown in the next story he is still a demon, but at the moment he is working for the Powers Collective so in reality he is merely doing their bidding by taking the group to their mates and by saving them.

As for immortality, again I will explain further, but I can assure you the Council did not take immortality well. As for their mates, since most would be dead had the BtVS and AtS characters not shown up most, even the additional families will deal well with the immortality.

As for the plot summary part, I have no idea how to stop that as most of them feel that way to me as well.

Thanks
Calia
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LuvinDrDj
Review:
Great series, I hope to read more from you soon!
Review By [LuvinDrDj] • Date [8 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
Nice! When I read the first story, and found out that Xander was Immortal, I thought...Wow. That's too bad. It means that everyone he knew would die and he'd be alone. Then I find out that his family was the same as him. They just had to find their mates before the family could reunite. Then I thought that it would be too bad if the mates died and left the Immortal family. I loved the idea that with a touch they would change their mates to be like themselves. In love forever! I love that idea!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I already have part 3 done, I just have to get it typed up and on the site. i'm hoping everyone continues to enjoy the series.

Thanks
Calia
Review By [kayron] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I LOVE the Dawn/Gabriel pairing and cannot say enough times how there needs to be MORE Gabriel in spn fic.

My only critique is that most of the 'story' was you just telling us what happened - it wasn't until the end that it entered story format with dialogue and action.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from XanderLuvsAll
Review:
Great fic and can't wait for more. Just to let you know,its Bobby Singer not Dawson
Comments from author:
This is why you shouldn't type at 4 in the orning when you are on pain pills.

Thanks for letting me know and I am glad you enjoyed it. Willow and Kit are next on the series.

Thanks
Calia
Review By [XanderLuvsAll] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kyzhart
Review:
MUST HAVE MORE! I love this. I want to see more interactions with the mates. how is ZXan fitting in up there? How is Atlantis reacting to him and the other arrivals etc. This looks to be the start of something quite neet.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Right now Xander has only been on Atlantis for a few hours. Though time stretched out for him before he met his mates, Faith and Dawn have only been away from him for a few minutes. Once the mates and family have all come to Atlantis I will be writing more interactions between the Atlantis personal and the Council Family. The group will be very popular as their gifts are used for the good of Atlantis and after their meetings with the Genii and Wraith.

Thanks
Calia
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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