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Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
This is a truly impressive story, I really enjoyed the read and had an Idea towards the end for a alternate version.
Harry found by Dr. Fate (Kent V. Nelson) and trained to fulfill his destiny.
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from Scorpio
Review:
Okay, I loved this. I've seen other stories of Harry in the Marvelverse, but never with Dr. Strange. Funny that, since I now believe this is a perfect match. Wonderful, even. Plus, I like how you subtly pointed out that the wizarding world knew about the supers and their powers. The fact that they hide from the world at large in general and the super powered people in particular really does highlight the wizarding worlds cowardice.

And at the end, I really liked that Ron, Hermione, Remus, & Sirius left with Harry and ended becoming members of the Defenders. *grins* It makes me wonder what their superhero code-names are. Padfoot and Moony are an easy guess. I'm thinking Fire Maiden for Hermione. However, Ron's technically not an Auror anymore and the title Boy-Who-Lived doesn't fit Harry anymore. So...hmmm.

Anyhow, I would love to see a sequel to this. I think Baron Mordo and his Voldemort infested diadem attacking the Defenders would be an interesting story.
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from Cateagle
Review:
A very well-done crossover and quite believable. I daresay that Albus will never again be in a position of influence or control and I have to wonder just how much that remaining horcrux will help against Harry and friends (methinks it won't do near as much good as Mephisto and Mordo believe and I'm certain Tommy-boy is going to find that Mordo is way, way out of his league). In any case, it's been a most enjoyable read.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done an excellent job with this story and I hope that you will get inspired to write a sequel.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Strawberry Chocolate Pie::

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Ch 8

nicely done fight even if it cost a lot.

Ch 9


thank you for sharing this nice fic with us. It was enjoyable to read and I hope to see a sequel soon with the end
you gave us ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [21 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire Maiden" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1. Decisions

nice start and nice Harry has thrown a spanner into Dumbles plans ;)

2. Choices

ahh good the Horcrux in Harry is gone and if I read it right the others as well and nice
Fate is willing to train Harry and help Sirius.

3. Losses

ahh nice how Dumbledork was put into place.

4. As the Years Roll By

nice summary chapter about what all happened while Harry trained. A shame about Neville.

5. Returning

UHH teen? shouldn't Harry be in his twenties now, after 7 years with Strange?
and Dumbledork still an idiot :)

6. Something New, Something Different

nice idea to ask Thor for dealing with the giants and good the Dementors are gone
as well.

7. Fire Maiden

You can only shake your head about Dumblethedork and the others. Good the vamps are down as well.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from Hecatonchires
Review:
I enjoyed this. Looking forward to the sequel :)
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
As bad an ending as canon. In the end there is no real ending just a delay before it all starts up again.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
I might have some doubts about just how blind and fixated Dumbledore was on doing things ‘his’ way- I REALLY have doubts about the idea that he was going to ‘let’ Umbridge in just to get closer to Harry, given how he distanced himself from Harry during that same time frame, and the thought that he was already planning to sacrifice himself seems a bit too far given that the Resurrection Stone always seemed to just be the result of a bad choice on his part-, but the circumstances that lead to Harry meeting Doctor Strange were definitely effective, and I definitely liked the idea of Doctor Strange ‘curing’ the horcruxes with the Soul Gem.

Still, your analysis of the fate of magical Britain as the war dragged on was certainly effective, and I definitely liked such additional touches as the appearance of Thor during the fight with the giants (Even if a part of me wishes that Harry had contacted Blade for the vampires; might have been interesting to see what Hermione thought of the chance to meet such a unique figure).

Dumbledore’s last scene might have made him come across as being a bit TOO deluded- why Harry would consent to over a decade of analysis makes no sense under any circumstances that I can think of-, but the final battle was at least dramatic, and it looks like Harry and his friends are doing well for themselves.

Hope you keep sequel potential in mind; the possibilities of Harry’s Defenders (Just out of curiosity, who’s the girl in the armour?) going up against that bad guy are CERTAIN to be interesting reading...
Comments from author:
Working out how I want it to go with the sequel still.

I happen to enjoy manipulative and insane DD fics and decided to try my hand a one, it came out okay I think on that level, not great but okay.

Glad you liked my magical war Britain, and my various cameos. If I do a sequel as I plan to there will be more of them. Then again I have a sequel to my Scooby Titans fic started as well.

The armored girl was Magik. Former New Mutant, original weilder of the Soul Sword , demon sorceress, and who knows what else. I just slapped a bunch of people with magical abilities together for my paper since I don't think Magik or Blade were ever members of the team.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [2 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Are you planning a sequel?
Comments from author:
Yes actually I am. Only the fight will be in NY which means more heroes. I'm still trying to plan it out right now though so it will probably be a while.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from mendenbar
Review:
And once again it is shown that the only happy ending is death after a life of struggle.
Comments from author:
Can't enjoy life without suffering. You earn your reward for all that you've done.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet work
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
on Reading Rainbow! (lol)

Interesting place to stop.
as always keep up the good work
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from justapiranha
Review:
loved it! Thank you for writting it.
Comments from author:
glad you enjoyed it
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bugger Off, I’m Going Home" from Rob
Review:
Nicely ominous ending, well done!
Comments from author:
Sets the stage for another story very well I thought.
Review By [Rob] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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