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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
This is my idea of a perfect little Expendables cross...Cordy and Lee partnering up and playing to their strengths. You've got great "showing, not telling" in a tightly written little piece which I hope you expand on at some point.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DesitaniaF
Review:
Loved that movie! And your story
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [31 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EgSparks
Review:
That was FANTASTIC !!!! Since I saw the movie I WANTED a story with Cordelia as lacy.... AWESOME E !!!
Review By [EgSparks] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
And that is the way it should be :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from velara
Review:
I like. Well written :)

Only thing that stuck out to me.. "Dawn and Richard are coming" but then next it's "Daniel and Dawn Jackson". Was there some switching of pairings/crossovers there? Oopsies?
Comments from author:
I'm working on two or three different stories at once, names get confused.
Review By [velara] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grd
Review:
Lots of potential for fun. Thank you.
Review By [grd] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Maybe I'm mistaken but, its implied that Lacey did cheated on Lee, and while Lee saves her from her abusive boyfriend, it doesn't look like he takes her back.
But that's what fanfics are for, I think.
And Christmas might be one hell of a fighter, but I think he's gonna borrow Hale's little toy: the AA-12.
Anyhow, cool fic, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Cordelia assumed he left her when his stuff was off the lawn and he didn't even fight her. So in this fanfic, she did not cheat on him.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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