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The case of Roberta Cain

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Review of chapter "The case of Roberta Cain" from stonewar
Review:
sorry I couldn't finish it. It was a little scattered, frenetic and sparse. I think it needs fleshed out a little to slow the pace down. It feels like you are trying to hard to be funny.

edit: Really? Allison's Bizzare PMS pill popping is not meant to be Slap stick?
Comments from author:
Sorry that you feel this way. I will definetly try to be better in the future, and more slow. But no, I wasn't trying to be funny at all, BTW.
Review By [stonewar] • Date [31 Aug 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The case of Roberta Cain" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written 'freaky' Stark. It's not natural him being nice.
Comments from author:
Hah. Thanks for the review!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [31 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The case of Roberta Cain" from Gideon
Review:
Sounds like a terrible place to work :(
Comments from author:
Meh, if you say so.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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